Khan_E_F
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Heart of a Crusader (beginning).
#64370 - 06/14/03 03:14 AM (131.181.127.33)
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I'm currently writing a new Btech story, its not complete but heres what I've got so far.
The Heart of a Crusader
Prologue:
HQ: This is HQ command to all recon units, we have enemy activity towards the north. Transferring coordinates as Nav Epsilon…
Locust 21: This is Locust 21 reporting for duty, I have 2 enemy scorpions on radar…err… no enemy mechs yet… please advise.
HQ: This is HQ command to Locust ID 21, star commander, destroy the pikes and continue recon towards Nav Epsilon. Toggle radar to active mode and switch off ECM and stealth for maximum scout efficiency… Satellite reports at least 3 enemy units, but something is jamming our sensors so we’ll need a visual before further assistance.
Locust 21: Roger that HQ command, trottle full… moving towards Nav Epsilon.
(The locust enters past the canyon and into a clearing)
Locust 21: Enemy scorpions spotted… firing… target 1 destroyed, engaging target 2… WOW!… Flash traffic! Flash traffic! Unidentified wasp has entered the field. Engaging…
Unknown Mech: Hold your fire their commander! This is recon wasp ID 53… Sorry but there’s a lot of enemy activity around the area, had to put stealth and ECM to max.
Locust 21: Roger that Wasp 53… HQ has ordered us to scout Nav Epsilon, turn off your ECM and Stealth and set active radar on.
Wasp 51: Yes sir commander! Consider it done.
(The 2 mechs take out the remaining scorpion and head through the forest towards Nav Epsilon. The 2 reach Nav Epsilon and find themselves in a misty swamp)
Wasp 51: Commander… my sensors are starting to malfunction… There must be a jammer somewhere around here.
Locust 21: Visuals pretty bad, I suggest we keep close. Wasp 51, form up on my lead.
Wasp 51: Commander… I’ve got 2 mechs on radar… scanning… whew, there friendlies sir, guess we’ll get some support in this miss…ARGHH!! (Transmission lost)
Locust 21: HQ Command! We’re getting friendly fire here by 2 mechs… Wasp 51 is down! Repeat, Wasp 51 is down! please advise!
HQ: Star Commander… This is HQ Command, engage traitors by authorization code 325.
Locust 21: Roger engaging enemies. LRMs are locked and away! (Locust 21 Computer: WARNING! INCOMING MISSILES).
Locust 21: HQ! My mechs are taking pretty bad damage! Requesting to retreat and regroup! (Locust 21 Computer: WARINING! CRITICAL DAMAGE… WARNING! INTERNAL AMMO EXPLOSION DETECTED! EJECTION IN 3… 2… 1… EJECTING)
HQ: Locust 21… retreat and regroup at coordinates Nav Gamma. We’re sending 2 heavies on your way… Locust 21 please comply… Locust 21, what is your status?… Locust 21? Repeat, what is your status!
CHAPTER 1 – Unlikely Allies.
“Lieutenant Gem, want happened out their! Where is Commander Krieson! I ordered him to report to me 2 hours ago! I will not be kept waiting!” Blasted Major Braddock. “Sir! I’m afraid his been killed in battle, salvage reports his Mech about 2 clicks from Nav Epsilon. Sorry sir.” Answered Lieutenant Gem. “What!” screamed Braddock, “killed in combat? He was assigned to a simple reconnaissance mission, how can he be destroyed!”. “There was a battle near by and he was called on to join,” replied Gem. “Called to battle? Was his ejection pod still in the cockpit?” Demanded Braddock. “Umm.. we’re not sure sir, it appeared that an internal ammo explosion destroyed his Mech. There were very little remains of his Mech except for some pieces left from his right leg and left torso.”
(chapter incomplete)
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Glory To The Clans!
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TheDeadlyShoe
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Reged: 06/22/02
Posts: 1621
Loc: Redmond, WA
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Re: Heart of a Crusader (beginning).
#64566 - 06/16/03 02:59 AM (4.41.158.188)
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arrrgh okay you need to fix whateever's causing those problems in the text, it hurts to read ATM 
other than that yay 
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Shoe for the NSI
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