Talk:22nd Dieron Regulars

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Clean up[edit]

I could argue that this article is no longer a stub, though it can definitely be expanded upon if the source information is out there. However, it reads very, very rough. If a reader were to read it out loud, it would be close to non-sensical. I imagine there is probably enough info to address the "5 Ws and 1 H" (who, what, why, where, when and how). Just needs some time and work. --Revanche (talk|contribs) 19:11, 13 January 2010 (UTC)