Talk:Dierdre Lear

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Name Correction Needed

Dr. Lear's first name is Deirdre, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected!Nuclear-Fridge (talk) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST)

I moved the article and corrected all wrong spellings on Sarna that I could find. Frabby (talk) 08:16, 13 December 2017 (EST)

General Cleanup

In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. Ross (talk) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT)

Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive Ross (talk) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT)

Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice Ross (talk) 16:03, 9 April 2024 (EDT)

Marked the final line of the article as "Citation Needed," which is accurate. Further, all details following her marriage to Kai Allard-Liao need to be fleshed out.Ross (talk) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT)

Removed Incomprehensible Tag

Removed the tag as I think the article should meet most editorial standards now, despite lack of detail that should come from Assumption of Risk.Ross (talk) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT)