Talk:Dire Wolf (Daishi)

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Heres what I did and why:

Moved entry to fit within naming conventions
Fixed infobox
Changed description and removed "Its variant, Dire wolf - C, is the most powerful of all 'Mechs, Inner Sphere or Clan." as it is more opinion then fact.
Updated arms and configurations
Added References
Fixed All Battle Values
Removed - "== Non-official Variants==
Cranfill: Jump rate: 3. ERPPC x2, Gauss Rifle, ER Large Laser, AMS x3, ECM Suite. Maximum heat: 46. Maximum heat dissipation: 40. Battle Value: 3,421." (as the canon mech page is not intended for custom player variants)

Basically fleshed out what was put up. I like Daniel's enthusiasm but I hope that if you put any new stuff up you check out the templates as they have changed slightly. --CJKeys 22:26, 12 December 2006 (CST)

Alright, I went over it, rewrote a lot of it, but now I'm tired and need some sleep. I've now tagged this for peer review, as it's had its new review. I need someone to go over this, and the other two 'Mechs I rewrote today to see if there are any obvious errors; two pairs of eyes are better than one, after all. --Xoid 14:10, 13 December 2006 (CST)
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