Talk:Emma Centrella

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Article needs more information. I do not have the old Periphery books (least i don't think i do.) at this time. If anyone can fill in missing blanks for this character that would help. The 20 Year Update I do have handy is sorely out of date and missing daughter Naomi, Erde, Diana Centrella from being listed as her daughters. I don't know previous children listed are invalid. -- Wrangler 12:22, 25 September 2009 (UTC)

I am currently rewording the entire article for more clear and concise wordings, so please tell me if I have removed important info or if the meaning of something has changed. BobTheZombie (talk) 14:28, 19 June 2013 (PDT)
Okay, I've made it to [through, somehow] the "The Bull and Liao" section, and have begun a very slow plow through this, and have removed much "information" in the process. If I have removed something important, notify me and I will attempt to fix it, but some of what is on this page is quite simply incomprehensible and frankly embarrassing to the wiki. I'll try to keep steadily working on this page regardless. BobTheZombie (talk) 22:57, 20 June 2013 (PDT)
Hope you don't mind a couple of tweaks here & there. The grammar in this article seems pretty uneven, almost like a series of bullet points that have been strung together to make paragraphs... Nuclear-Fridge (talk) 03:02, 21 June 2013 (PDT)
Go ahead, I'd appreciate some help! This page is a minefield... WHOOPS. I skipped a part or two of what I thought I got done. Sorry! BobTheZombie (talk) 09:13, 21 June 2013 (PDT)
There. Now the "First efforts as Magestrix" section is done. BobTheZombie (talk) 09:29, 21 June 2013 (PDT)
I think that I'm done here, so I'll leave this page as it is, and I'm going to remove the {cleanup} tag, if that's okay. BobTheZombie (talk) 16:31, 21 June 2013 (PDT)