Talk:Rasalhague Dominion

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I saw this article had some bad grammar/misspellings/etc., which I decided to fix. I also reorganized the article slightly, so it flows a little better. Lastly, "it" and "they" can have multiple meanings, so I replaced these pronouns with names. I merely did some copy editing, but I don't know the Dark Age background. Therefore:

1. As I don't know the background, PLEASE BRIEFLY CHECK THE INFORMATION. I don't want a simple misinterpretation of the sloppy writing on this page to result in any misinformation. 2. Most sources point to 3103 as the start date of the Dominion, but the article itself said 3130. Since there were at least 3 pages saying 3103, and only 1 saying 3130, I "fixed" the error. Please make sure the date is correct.

Thanks!--S.gage 07:02, 4 July 2009 (UTC)

Ghost Bear Redirect[edit]

Would it be appropriate to set up a redirect from "Ghost Bear Dominion" to "Rasalhague Dominion"? ClanWolverine101 16:05, 20 April 2010 (UTC)

I think it would work.. the two states are pretty much the same thing anyway. --Dmon 17:00, 20 April 2010 (UTC)