Talk:White Flame

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Minor Issues[edit]

There is some clumsy wording in the description that I tried to reword, but it still doesn't work for me: "The White Flame is as protected by its jump jets that can propel it up to 150 meters as by its fifteen tons of armor." Also the first sentence of the first variant should be more encyclopedia-like... BobTheZombie (talk) 15:22, 18 June 2013 (PDT)

Hy, feel free to change or fix some things you don't like.--Doneve (talk) 15:59, 18 June 2013 (PDT)