BattleTechWiki:Project Unfinished Book/JTP:New Avalon/The Show Must Go On

Assignment Progress: 50%

Lead Developer: Articles Links

Assigned: Revanche

Comments: Completed

  • 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
  • Note the personal name for the Griffin.
  • Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.

Research Writer: Articles Completed

Assigned: Revanche

Comments: Completed

  • The following articles I felt did not benefit from any mention of this skirmish: Avitue, Federated Suns, Grigori, Word of Blake
  • Awaiting feedback on whether Ergen is a notable Griffin pilot.
  • Despite Sarna's notability policy indicating everything named has relevance, creating an article for Broadway, a "six-lane road" in which the protagonist half-way crossed in a one-page story, seems excessive. I'm fine with red-linking it in this assignment's other articles—in the possibility it might have or will have notoriety.
  • Sparky re-directs to Griffin, an appropriate connection for a named 'Mech.

Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed

Assigned: none at present

Copy Editor: Articles Edited

Assigned: none at present

Comments:

Tools

  • Full cite: <ref name=JTPL01>''Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon'', p. 1, "The Show Must Go On"</ref>
  • Recall cite: <ref name=JTPL01/>
  • Bibliography: ''[[Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon]]''
  • Talk page: {{WikiProject UnfinishedBook|tr=new}}

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