Difference between revisions of "Talk:Celano"

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:::I'll go and fiddle with the sentence stucture and references to see if I can make it a bit clearer. I don't think I have the revised edition handy here at work, and I'm not an expert on the TROs - I don't remember reading that detail on the Kestrel, but it ought to be in the article if it isn't already. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 06:06, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
 
:::I'll go and fiddle with the sentence stucture and references to see if I can make it a bit clearer. I don't think I have the revised edition handy here at work, and I'm not an expert on the TROs - I don't remember reading that detail on the Kestrel, but it ought to be in the article if it isn't already. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 06:06, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
 
:::ETA: Having just checked the Kestrel entry in the original TRO:3058, it makes no mention of the Kestrel being used by MI5 - in fact, it states that the vehicle is only in use with Wolf's Dragoons... [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 06:25, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
 
:::ETA: Having just checked the Kestrel entry in the original TRO:3058, it makes no mention of the Kestrel being used by MI5 - in fact, it states that the vehicle is only in use with Wolf's Dragoons... [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 06:25, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
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::::There must be a mistake somewhere. Quick search on "Stealthy Fox" shows a link to [[Department of Military Intelligence]] of the AFFS, and the Stealthy Foxes are MI4, not MI5.-[[User:Volt|Volt]] ([[User talk:Volt|talk]]) 06:35, 30 July 2014 (PDT)

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Reference

Hi guys, I am unable to find the reference to 3019 in the article of Celeano(sic) in The Periphery (sourcebook). Can anyone point to me the appropriate source indicating Celano existed prior to 3040? Thanks! -Volt (talk) 05:09, 30 July 2014 (PDT)

TRO 3058 (I'm looking at the first Ed, haven't checked the Revised Ed) - page 10 - Maultier Hover APC. "The design was thought to be lost forever until a young Taurian famer on Celeano stumbled on the remains of a Star League storehouse while plowing his fields in 3019." BrokenMnemonic (talk) 05:21, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
Oh, I don't have that copy. The revised one mentions Celano under the Notable Pilots section of the Kestrel (Combat Vehicle) VTOL
"The only ground-level images extant of the supposed crash site of the Star League expedition on Celano were reputedly taken by MI5 “Stealthy Fox” agents using Kestrels to move about the Taurian world undetected."
In the Entry of the Maultier in the same TRO "Secretly rediscovered by the Taurians in 3019,..." There is no hint of a correlation between the "supposed crash site" and the secret rediscovery outside of the original TRO:3058. If that reference was not recorded properly this missing link would have become Lostech over time-Volt (talk) 05:42, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
I'll go and fiddle with the sentence stucture and references to see if I can make it a bit clearer. I don't think I have the revised edition handy here at work, and I'm not an expert on the TROs - I don't remember reading that detail on the Kestrel, but it ought to be in the article if it isn't already. BrokenMnemonic (talk) 06:06, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
ETA: Having just checked the Kestrel entry in the original TRO:3058, it makes no mention of the Kestrel being used by MI5 - in fact, it states that the vehicle is only in use with Wolf's Dragoons... BrokenMnemonic (talk) 06:25, 30 July 2014 (PDT)
There must be a mistake somewhere. Quick search on "Stealthy Fox" shows a link to Department of Military Intelligence of the AFFS, and the Stealthy Foxes are MI4, not MI5.-Volt (talk) 06:35, 30 July 2014 (PDT)