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Hamilton City Brunswick Continent New Avalon Federated Suns 3074
Natasha Ergen Grigori Word of Blake Griffin Corean Enterprises

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  • 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
  • Note the personal name for the Griffin.
  • Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.

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