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:Ok I get it now, sources used were the old CJF, CWF and Invading Clans books, which were incomplete and filled with error. Once the moratorium on Era Report:3052 is up the information there can be used to update the list. I've already implemented the info from ER:3052 on my database so you can use that as basis. Also, Brocchi's Cluster (40) was captured by CSJ during Wave 2 according to Herb Beas, though it's not mentioned in the Era Report. -[[User:Volt|Volt]] 16:30, 28 January 2012 (PST)
 
:Ok I get it now, sources used were the old CJF, CWF and Invading Clans books, which were incomplete and filled with error. Once the moratorium on Era Report:3052 is up the information there can be used to update the list. I've already implemented the info from ER:3052 on my database so you can use that as basis. Also, Brocchi's Cluster (40) was captured by CSJ during Wave 2 according to Herb Beas, though it's not mentioned in the Era Report. -[[User:Volt|Volt]] 16:30, 28 January 2012 (PST)
 
::Saw your updated message here, Volt. ''[[Era Report: 3052]]'' is out of the moratorium (we remove the moratorium banner when it expires); can you make the changes you referenced here and possibly link to Beas' statement when you update the Brocchi's Cluster data?
 
::Saw your updated message here, Volt. ''[[Era Report: 3052]]'' is out of the moratorium (we remove the moratorium banner when it expires); can you make the changes you referenced here and possibly link to Beas' statement when you update the Brocchi's Cluster data?
::By the way, I got to experiment some with BlackNova's maps, with which he credits your work. Awesome stuff. I'm looking to get one printed and laminated.--[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 20:36, 28 January 2012 (PST)
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::By the way, I got to experiment some with BlackNova's [http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,15408.0.html maps], with which he credits your work. Awesome stuff. I'm looking to get one printed and laminated.--[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 20:36, 28 January 2012 (PST)
 
:::hey Rev, sure no problem, will update the waves and apply the appropriate references when I get home tonight. -[[User:Volt|Volt]] 02:24, 29 January 2012 (PST)
 
:::hey Rev, sure no problem, will update the waves and apply the appropriate references when I get home tonight. -[[User:Volt|Volt]] 02:24, 29 January 2012 (PST)
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::::Excellent! Thanks. --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 03:57, 29 January 2012 (PST)
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:::::Done! Added unlisted systems, removed one system that did not belong to the list, placed some worlds in the appropriate wave. Added the inclusive dates (month/year) of the Periphery invasion, and changed date of Wave 5 from Dec 3051 to Jan 3052 as Battle of Luthien occurred in January of '52.-[[User:Volt|Volt]] 05:34, 29 January 2012 (PST)
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::::::Great job! If ''you'' feel the article has been updated with all the information ''Era Report: 3052'' has provided, feel free to remove the update tag. Thanks!--[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 06:36, 29 January 2012 (PST)
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:::::::Um, actually I have not read most of the Operation Revival entry of Era Report: 3052, I just breezed through the invasion waves as that was my immediate need at the time. I'll need to go on vacation in order to catch up to both era reports, masters & minions, WoR, Klondike, Final Reckoning and FM:3085.-[[User:Volt|Volt]] 22:14, 29 January 2012 (PST)
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::::::::I understand. I haven't even read that book yet, but know it's large. The tag should not be removed then, since it is probably chock-full of nutty goodness. --[[User:Revanche|Revanche]] <sup>([[User_talk:Revanche|talk]]|[[Special:Contributions/Revanche|contribs]])</sup> 04:00, 30 January 2012 (PST)

Latest revision as of 08:00, 30 January 2012

I will start a new project and I need your help. I have all material of the Clan Invasion, with all planets waves and units. My goal is a complete overview about this operation with maps, unit tables and so on.The sheer size of this project is awosome. What are your opinion about it and help can you offer. Tnx, Neuling 23:33, 18 February 2010 (UTC)Neuling

It give some problems with the browser when i correct the imagesize to a smaller px.Doneve 20:20, 29 March 2010 (UTC)
The article must by totally cleandup, good work from Neuling, but it is not our wiki standard.--Doneve 14:36, 31 December 2010 (UTC)
I adding the Underconstruction template, i moved in the next days the whole content, to involved military unit and planet pages, and cleand up the article to his ground, fluff writing is also welcome :). --Doneve 21:08, 9 May 2011 (UTC)

Improvements[edit]

There are two problems with this article right now.

First, it is far too large. It needs to be greatly reduced in size. As a starting point, I will suggest splitting off the sections by the invaded nation (Clan Invasion in the Periphery, Clan Invasion in the Draconis Combine, etc.)

Second, there are too many tables. Some of the information makes sense in tables, but the battle narratives do not belong in tables and should be removed. --Scaletail 02:40, 19 May 2011 (UTC)

I'm at the moment the activist writer for these article and I think it is useful to seperate the induvidual clans. About the table for me it is the best way to show informantion in an compact form. I will changed nothing about the table structure before not a good alterniv way is available. Neuling 05:47, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Perhaps something closer to what was done with Operation Bulldog? ClanWolverine101 15:47, 19 May 2011 (UTC)

Captured Worlds[edit]

Some incorrect data on the captured worlds, particularly on CJF and CGB. I'm gonna check my old sourcebooks [when I find them], what I do know for sure is that Alkalurops is WAAAAY below the Tukayyid line for CJF to capture. -Volt 19:08, 26 January 2012 (PST)

Ok I get it now, sources used were the old CJF, CWF and Invading Clans books, which were incomplete and filled with error. Once the moratorium on Era Report:3052 is up the information there can be used to update the list. I've already implemented the info from ER:3052 on my database so you can use that as basis. Also, Brocchi's Cluster (40) was captured by CSJ during Wave 2 according to Herb Beas, though it's not mentioned in the Era Report. -Volt 16:30, 28 January 2012 (PST)
Saw your updated message here, Volt. Era Report: 3052 is out of the moratorium (we remove the moratorium banner when it expires); can you make the changes you referenced here and possibly link to Beas' statement when you update the Brocchi's Cluster data?
By the way, I got to experiment some with BlackNova's maps, with which he credits your work. Awesome stuff. I'm looking to get one printed and laminated.--Revanche (talk|contribs) 20:36, 28 January 2012 (PST)
hey Rev, sure no problem, will update the waves and apply the appropriate references when I get home tonight. -Volt 02:24, 29 January 2012 (PST)
Excellent! Thanks. --Revanche (talk|contribs) 03:57, 29 January 2012 (PST)
Done! Added unlisted systems, removed one system that did not belong to the list, placed some worlds in the appropriate wave. Added the inclusive dates (month/year) of the Periphery invasion, and changed date of Wave 5 from Dec 3051 to Jan 3052 as Battle of Luthien occurred in January of '52.-Volt 05:34, 29 January 2012 (PST)
Great job! If you feel the article has been updated with all the information Era Report: 3052 has provided, feel free to remove the update tag. Thanks!--Revanche (talk|contribs) 06:36, 29 January 2012 (PST)
Um, actually I have not read most of the Operation Revival entry of Era Report: 3052, I just breezed through the invasion waves as that was my immediate need at the time. I'll need to go on vacation in order to catch up to both era reports, masters & minions, WoR, Klondike, Final Reckoning and FM:3085.-Volt 22:14, 29 January 2012 (PST)
I understand. I haven't even read that book yet, but know it's large. The tag should not be removed then, since it is probably chock-full of nutty goodness. --Revanche (talk|contribs) 04:00, 30 January 2012 (PST)