Talk:Magi

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Cleanup[edit]

The sections need a general review for articles (the, an, a, etc.), as it cannot be read without a bit of 'translation' by the reader. There may also still be wikilinks to be added.--Revanche (talk|contribs) 13:35, 16 January 2010 (UTC)

I put a first pass on cleaning up the grammar here. ThePov 02:53, 17 February 2010 (UTC)
I made another stab at smoothing out the grammar a few days back. --Museling 22:06, 14 March 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, both. Whenever you guys feel it passes, please feel free to remove the tag. --Revanche (talk|contribs) 23:20, 14 March 2010 (UTC)