User talk:Mbear/PlanetPageTest

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Revision as of 19:43, 3 November 2012 by Neufeld (talk | contribs) (Feedback.)
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Feedback

It looks mostly fine to me. Some minor tweaks that I would suggest are:

  • "forces involved" needs to start with a capital letter.
  • Links to the factions would also be nice.
  • Location needs to include planet and faction.
--Neufeld (talk) 16:43, 3 November 2012 (PDT)

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