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The Black Marauder resembles an MAD-3R ''[[Marauder]]'' with flat black paint, although its shape supposedly looks somehow "wrong" and its "proportions not quite right", too sleek yet of terribly imposing bulk and with too-smooth angles. It has no serial number and no other factory markings whatsoever.
 
The Black Marauder resembles an MAD-3R ''[[Marauder]]'' with flat black paint, although its shape supposedly looks somehow "wrong" and its "proportions not quite right", too sleek yet of terribly imposing bulk and with too-smooth angles. It has no serial number and no other factory markings whatsoever.
  
Its presence seems to grow larger when sight is obscured by darkness, fog or smoke, incidentally circumstances in which it seems to perform markedly better.
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Its presence seems to grow larger when sight is obscured by darkness, fog or smoke, incidentially circumstances in which it seems to perform markedly better.
  
 
In some instances the 'Mech was—always inconclusively—described to move in ways that are impossible for a ''Marauder'' (or any 'Mech), including one tale where it was said to have turned its "head" by bending its long snout just forward of the arm joints and revealed a maw with rows of serrated teeth.
 
In some instances the 'Mech was—always inconclusively—described to move in ways that are impossible for a ''Marauder'' (or any 'Mech), including one tale where it was said to have turned its "head" by bending its long snout just forward of the arm joints and revealed a maw with rows of serrated teeth.

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