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Line 15: ==History== ==History== − [[Leutnant]] '''Jaochim von Heldenberg''' (see Notes below) was a [[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]] who piloted his ''[[Zeus]]'', ''Dortmund'', in the first live-fire test of [[Project Icicle]], a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] technology project. The live-fire test failed spectacularly, killing all nearby personnel including Von Heldenberg. + [[Leutnant]] '''Jaochim von Heldenberg''' (see Notes below) was a [[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]] who piloted his ''[[Zeus]]'', "''Dortmund''", in the first live-fire test of [[Operation ICICLE]], a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] technology project. The live fire test failed spectacularly, killing all nearby personnel including Von Heldenberg. − It is suspected that a technician made a mistake under fire and failed to correctly attach a coolant hose that would have replenished coolant from a support vehicle. When the Icicle system flushed all coolant from the 'Mech, it thus failed to reacquire new coolant and the 'Mech reached above-critical heat levels, which led to an ammunition explosion.<ref name=3135PDAJp64>''3135 PDA Journals'', p. 64: "07 July 3135"</ref> + It is suspected that a technician made a mistake under fire and failed to correctly attach a coolant hose that would have replenished coolant from a support vehicle. When the Icicle system flushed all coolant from the 'Mech, it thus failed to reacquire new coolant and the 'Mech reached above-critical heat levels that led to an explosion of the on-board ammunition.<ref name=3135PDAJp64>''3135 PDA Journals'', p. 64 "07 July 3135"</ref> ==BattleMech== ==BattleMech== − He piloted a ''Zeus'' named ''Dortmund'', outfitted with half the normal complement of heat sinks to facilitate testing.<ref name=3135PDAJp64/> + He piloted a ''Zeus'', named "Dortmund", outfitted with half the normal complement of heat sinks to facilitate testing.<ref name=3135PDAJp64/> ==Notes== ==Notes== − *The first name ("Jaochim") is stated only once in the report about the incident. It may be a misspelling of the German name "Joachim". (There are some other spelling errors in the document, too.) + *The first name ("Jaochim") is spelled out only one single time in the report about the incident. It may be a misspelling of the German name "Joachim". (There are some other spelling errors in the document, too.) ==References== ==References== Line 30:
Line 30: ==Bibliography== ==Bibliography== * ''[[3135 PDA Journals]]'' * ''[[3135 PDA Journals]]'' − [[Category:Lyran Commonwealth Characters|Heldenberg, Jaochim von]] [[Category:Lyran Commonwealth Characters|Heldenberg, Jaochim von]]
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==History== | ==History== | ||
| − | [[Leutnant]] '''Jaochim von Heldenberg''' (see Notes below) was a [[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]] who piloted his ''[[Zeus]]'', ''Dortmund'', in the first live-fire test of [[ | + | [[Leutnant]] '''Jaochim von Heldenberg''' (see Notes below) was a [[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]] who piloted his ''[[Zeus]]'', "''Dortmund''", in the first live-fire test of [[Operation ICICLE]], a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] technology project. The live fire test failed spectacularly, killing all nearby personnel including Von Heldenberg. |
| − | It is suspected that a technician made a mistake under fire and failed to correctly attach a coolant hose that would have replenished coolant from a support vehicle. When the Icicle system flushed all coolant from the 'Mech, it thus failed to reacquire new coolant and the 'Mech reached above-critical heat levels | + | It is suspected that a technician made a mistake under fire and failed to correctly attach a coolant hose that would have replenished coolant from a support vehicle. When the Icicle system flushed all coolant from the 'Mech, it thus failed to reacquire new coolant and the 'Mech reached above-critical heat levels that led to an explosion of the on-board ammunition.<ref name=3135PDAJp64>''3135 PDA Journals'', p. 64 "07 July 3135"</ref> |
==BattleMech== | ==BattleMech== | ||
| − | He piloted a ''Zeus'' named | + | He piloted a ''Zeus'', named "Dortmund", outfitted with half the normal complement of heat sinks to facilitate testing.<ref name=3135PDAJp64/> |
==Notes== | ==Notes== | ||
| − | *The first name ("Jaochim") is | + | *The first name ("Jaochim") is spelled out only one single time in the report about the incident. It may be a misspelling of the German name "Joachim". (There are some other spelling errors in the document, too.) |
==References== | ==References== | ||
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==Bibliography== | ==Bibliography== | ||
* ''[[3135 PDA Journals]]'' | * ''[[3135 PDA Journals]]'' | ||
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[[Category:Lyran Commonwealth Characters|Heldenberg, Jaochim von]] | [[Category:Lyran Commonwealth Characters|Heldenberg, Jaochim von]] | ||