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| publisher          = [[Fantasy Productions]]
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| productioncode      = 31003
 
| year                = January 2006 (original German edition)<br>October 27, 2021 (authoritative edition)
 
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| era                = [[Succession Wars Era|Early Succession Wars Era]]
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| era                = [[Star League era]]
| timeline            = 8 June [[2802]]-9 June[[2815]]<br>18 October [[2780]]-25 November 2780 (Interludes)
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| timeline            = 8 June [[2802]]-9 June[[2815]]
 
| series              = ''[[Founding of the Clans]]''
 
| series              = ''[[Founding of the Clans]]''
 
| precededby          = [[Fall from Glory]]
 
| precededby          = [[Fall from Glory]]
| followedby          = [[Land of Dreams]]
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| followedby          = [[Forging of Blood]]
 
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'''''Visions of Rebirth''''' is the second book in the ''[[Founding of the Clans]]'' trilogy. It narrates how [[Nicholas Kerensky]] leads his followers on a second Exodus to escape the [[Pentagon Civil War]], and reforges them into the [[Clans]]—his vision of an utopia warrior society.
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Published by [[FanPro]] as the fifth of their German-only line of [[FanPro Novels|Classic BattleTech novels]] in January 2006, '''''Clangründer: Traum''''' ("Clan Founders: Dream") is a translation of a novel by [[Randall N. Bills]]. The second part of the ''[[Founding of the Clans]]'' trilogy, the original English language text was announced for publication via [[BattleCorps]] in 2007 but failed to materialize.
  
The book's original manuscript remained unpublished for some two decades. After having written the first two books of the planned trilogy, Bills found that FASA unexpectedly ceased active operations in 2001, and [[Roc Books]] voiced no interest in publishing more novels in the [[BattleTech]] line which looked as if it was going to be discontinued. Meanwhile, the license was transferred to [[WizKids]] for their [[MechWarrior: Dark Age]] game which was set in the setting's future, with its own, distinct game and novel line.
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=== From the back cover (translated from German) ===
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{{quote|''The dream of a [[Star League]] in exile has failed. [[Nicholas Kerensky]] is unable to prevent war from spilling over from the Pentagon worlds. He decides to lead his followers on a [[second Exodus]], like his father once did who left the [[Inner Sphere]] with his fleet. But Nicholas chooses a different path: He wants to do away with all that was, and dreams of creating an entirely new society.<br />The bounds of society that go back millennia cannot be shed so easily. Resistance must be overcome and blood must be spilled before Nicholas' dream can come true. But without his brother [[Andery Kerensky|Andrey]]'s help the entire venture is doomed.<br />Brothers, however, don't always pursue the same goals. Andery finds that, as the last vestiges of civilization are purged in this new society, humanness wanes as well. Can he stop this development?''}}
  
[[Fantasy Productions]], the German BattleTech license holder, subsequently acquired the license to what was now dubbed "[[Classic BattleTech]]". They started a line of entirely [[FanPro Novels|new, original BattleTech print novels in German]] from 2004 onward. As part of that line, the manuscripts for the first two ''Founding of the Clans'' novels were translated and published; ''Visions of Rebirth'' was published as '''''[[Visions of Rebirth#Clangründer: Traum|Clangründer: Traum]]''''' in 2006 (see below).
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===Canonicity===
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Being published in German only, ''Clangründer: Traum'' does not technically meet the criteria for [[Canon]] in the BattleTech universe and must therefore be considered apocryphal.
  
Over the course of the [[2019 Clan Invasion crowdfunding campaign|2019 crowdfunding campaign]] for the [[BattleTech: Clan Invasion]] [[boxed set]], a re-release of the ''Founding of the Clans'' trilogy was unlocked as a stretch goal. Randall Bills and [[CGL]] decided to revise the first two books in the process, creating new, authoritative versions that were expanded over the originals and partly rewritten. The authoritative version of ''Visions of Rebirth'' was published on 27 October 2021.
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However, it should be noted that [[Herbert Beas]], in an official statement,<ref>Full text of canon ruling archived in [http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php?topic=586.0 this] summary thread on the official BattleTech forum</ref> made a somewhat unclear reference to this particular book that could be construed to mean it is actually fully canon despite having only been published in its German translation so far:
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:''"Computer games and the material printed only in Germany (with the exception of the Founding of the Clans novels by Randall Bills) are not considered canonical.''
  
=== From the back cover (translated from German) ===
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It is thought that the English-language original script is used for research by the [[CGL]] fact checker team and treated as essentially canonical even though it is technically unpublished.
{{quote|''The dream of a [[Star League]] in exile has failed. [[Nicholas Kerensky]] is unable to prevent war from spilling over from the Pentagon worlds. He decides to lead his followers on a [[second Exodus]], like his father once did who left the [[Inner Sphere]] with his fleet. But Nicholas chooses a different path: He wants to do away with all that was, and dreams of creating an entirely new society.<br />The bounds of society that go back millennia cannot be shed so easily. Resistance must be overcome and blood must be spilled before Nicholas' dream can come true. But without his brother [[Andery Kerensky|Andrey]]'s help the entire venture is doomed.<br />Brothers, however, don't always pursue the same goals. Andery finds that, as the last vestiges of civilization are purged in this new society, humanness wanes as well. Can he stop this development?''}}
 
  
 
==Plot Summary==
 
==Plot Summary==
:''Note that this plot summary is for the 2006 German edition. The revised and expanded 2021 authoritative edition is currently under moratorium.
 
 
As the Second Exodus fleet makes planetfall on [[Strana Mechty]] on 8 June [[2802]], [[Raymond Sainze]] and [[Windham Khatib]] discuss their feelings of anxiety about the whole idea of a second exodus. They agree that they need Nicholas Kerensky to lead them, but also need Andery Kerensky to keep his brother Nicholas in check in this.
 
As the Second Exodus fleet makes planetfall on [[Strana Mechty]] on 8 June [[2802]], [[Raymond Sainze]] and [[Windham Khatib]] discuss their feelings of anxiety about the whole idea of a second exodus. They agree that they need Nicholas Kerensky to lead them, but also need Andery Kerensky to keep his brother Nicholas in check in this.
  
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During one of the live-fire trials, Andery accidentally kills another [[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]], Captain Johann Keyes. Shocked over the unnecessary death he powers down his own 'Mech, and two years later to the day (on 1 May [[2805]]) he climbs Simon Mons and pours Keyes' ashes in the wind, noting the man had no relatives and only a few friends and thus would not be remembered for the ultimate sacrifice he gave for Nicholas' dream.
 
During one of the live-fire trials, Andery accidentally kills another [[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]], Captain Johann Keyes. Shocked over the unnecessary death he powers down his own 'Mech, and two years later to the day (on 1 May [[2805]]) he climbs Simon Mons and pours Keyes' ashes in the wind, noting the man had no relatives and only a few friends and thus would not be remembered for the ultimate sacrifice he gave for Nicholas' dream.
  
By [[2807]], Andery is a rifleman training instructor again. He is uncomfortable with the young age of his charges and about the foster family program that is now in place. His students are among the most successful in the tests, and his casual use of "''Aff''" spreads through the ranks and is adopted as part of a new speaking pattern that Nicholas models for his utopia society.
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By [[2807]], Andery is a rifleman training instructor again. He is uncomfortable with the young age of his charges and about the foster family program that is now in place. His students are among the most successful in the tests, and his casual use of "Aff" spreads through the ranks and is adopted as part of a new speaking pattern that Nicholas models for his utopia society.
  
 
Windham Khatib meanwhile is worried that his church had to make room for the city's construction, and Nicholas Kerensky seems unlikely to keep Jennifer Winson's promise to rebuild it eventually. He shares his sorrow with Andery who is unable to help him, realizing that Nicholas will not tolerate prayers to another god.
 
Windham Khatib meanwhile is worried that his church had to make room for the city's construction, and Nicholas Kerensky seems unlikely to keep Jennifer Winson's promise to rebuild it eventually. He shares his sorrow with Andery who is unable to help him, realizing that Nicholas will not tolerate prayers to another god.
  
On 11 June 2807 Nicholas Kerensky delivers a speech where he announces the formation of the [[Clans]] from a core of eight hundred elite warriors, and his intention to return to the Pentagon worlds to reconquer and pacify them. He concludes his speech with "''Seyla''", the word his and Andery's mother had used to utter at the conclusion of her prayers. Four days later, Andery is called to an improvised wedding ceremony between Nicholas and Jennifer during the night.
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On 11 June 2807 Nicholas Kerensky delivers a speech where he announces the formation of the [[Clans]] from a core of eight hundred elite warriors, and his intention to return to the Pentagon worlds to reconquer and pacify them. He concludes his speech with "Seyla", the word his and Andery's mother had used to utter at the conclusion of her prayers. Four days later, Andery is called to an improvised wedding ceremony between Nicholas and Jennifer during the night.
  
 
On 29 December 2807 Andery is tasked with bringing [[Sandra Tseng]] and [[Hans Jorgensson]] back from the polar region, after they refused to be separated and turned their backs on Nicholas Kerensky instead, a mission he succeeds in on 5 January [[2808]].
 
On 29 December 2807 Andery is tasked with bringing [[Sandra Tseng]] and [[Hans Jorgensson]] back from the polar region, after they refused to be separated and turned their backs on Nicholas Kerensky instead, a mission he succeeds in on 5 January [[2808]].
  
Dana Kufahl has meanwhile been elevated to the rank of [[Khan]] of [[Clan Coyote]]. Her decision to follow a vision and lead her Clan away into de facto exile in the dangerous Broken Sea desert causes a rift between her and Andery. [[Sarah McEvedy]] is becoming a friend to Andery in Dana's stead.
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Dana Kufahl has meanwhile been elevated to the rank of [[Khan]] of [[Clan Coyote]]. Her decision to follow a vision and lead her Clan away into de-facto exile in the dangerous Broken Sea desert causes a rift between her and Andery. [[Sarah McEvedy]] is becoming a friend to Andery in Dana's stead.
  
As Nicholas' appointed envoy to the nonmilitary castes, Andery is confronted with serious discord in late [[2814]] because the foster family program has been massively extended and has now been made mandatory. Senior Laborer Justin makes it clear that the civilians will not tolerate this perceived attack on family bonds. Andery realizes he is being set up as a catalyst for a possible uprising again, just like for the [[Prinz Eugen Mutiny]], and tries to talk the civilians out of their evident plans for rebellion. Still, an attempt on Nicholas' life is made during a parade on 27 December of that year that wounds several warriors and kills Andery's friend [[James Carson]], among others. Laborer Justin is found dead shortly afterwards, obviously in an attempt to appease Nicholas who is now ruthlessly exploiting the attack for his agenda—he had actually expected the attack (wearing a bullet-proof vest). Recovering from his wounds, Andery finds himself a helpless bystander again while Nicholas builds a new, rigidly organized meritocratic society centered around the Warrior caste and subdues the other castes into submission.
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As Nicholas' appointed envoy to the non-military castes, Andery is confronted with serious discord in late [[2814]] because the foster family program has been massively extended and has now been made mandatory. Senior Laborer Justin makes it clear that the civilians will not tolerate this perceived attack on family bonds. Andery realizes he is being set up as a catalyst for a possible uprising again, just like for the [[Prinz Eugen Mutiny]], and tries to talk the civilians out of their evident plans for rebellion. Still, an attempt on Nicholas' life is made during a parade on 27 December of that year that wounds several warriors and kills Andery's friend [[James Carson]], among others. Laborer Justin is found dead shortly afterwards, obviously in an attempt to appease Nicholas who is now ruthlessly exploiting the attack for his agenda—he had actually expected the attack (wearing a bullet-proof vest). Recovering from his wounds, Andery finds himself a helpless bystander again while Nicholas builds a new, rigidly organized meritocratic society centered around the Warrior caste and subdues the other castes into submission.
  
 
On 9 June [[2815]] Nicholas finally declares himself [[ilKhan]] and announces their return to the Pentagon. Andery has a very bad feeling about Nicholas' manipulations and personality cult, which have established him as something of a prophet or sect leader in his new order. In a private meeting on that evening, Jennifer Winson admits to Andery that she underwent plastic surgery, and was previously Jess Cole. She is both a glowing follower of Nicholas' ideas and a driving force for him, sharing his ideas and claiming to have served him as a loyal soldier since the occupation back on [[Terra]], wearing so many masks over time that one more ("Jennifer Winson") does not matter anymore.
 
On 9 June [[2815]] Nicholas finally declares himself [[ilKhan]] and announces their return to the Pentagon. Andery has a very bad feeling about Nicholas' manipulations and personality cult, which have established him as something of a prophet or sect leader in his new order. In a private meeting on that evening, Jennifer Winson admits to Andery that she underwent plastic surgery, and was previously Jess Cole. She is both a glowing follower of Nicholas' ideas and a driving force for him, sharing his ideas and claiming to have served him as a loyal soldier since the occupation back on [[Terra]], wearing so many masks over time that one more ("Jennifer Winson") does not matter anymore.
  
==Clangründer: Traum==
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==Notes==
[[Image:ClangründerTraumCover.jpg|thumb|left|2006 German edition cover]]
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*Translated from German, the Clan totem animal candidates on Nicholas Kerensky's list (when he adds the [[Smoke Jaguar (species)|Smoke Jaguar]]) include [[Fire Mandrill (species)|Fire Mandrill]], [[Ghost Bear (species)|Ghost Bear]], [[Eden Beaver]], [[Jade Falcon (species)|Jade Falcon]], [[Ice Hellion (species)|Ice Hellion]], [[Steel Viper (species)|Steel Viper]], [[Sphinx Raptor]], [[Snow Raven (species)|Snow Raven]], [[Surat]], [[Thunderbird (Species)|Thunderbird]], [[Chimera Kite]], [[Coyote (species)|Coyote]], Wolverine, Wolf, [[Cobalt Harrier]], [[Hell's Horse (species)|Hell's Horse]], and [[Blood Shadow]].
Published by [[FanPro]] as the fifth entry in their German-only line of [[FanPro Novels|Classic BattleTech novels]] in January 2006, '''''Clangründer: Traum''''' ("Clan Founders: Dream") was a translation of an earlier manuscript of this novel. It was notably the only published version of the story until 2021, when it was superseded in canon by the revised and expanded 2021 electronic edition.
 
  
 
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