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::::*The [[Kentares Massacre]] is a thing of the past and a finished event within the BT timeline. It is to be referred to in past tense, as it is a past event being reported on.
 
::::*The [[Kentares Massacre]] is a thing of the past and a finished event within the BT timeline. It is to be referred to in past tense, as it is a past event being reported on.
 
::::*The ''[[Locust]]'' ''is'', not ''was'', a 20-ton 'Mech and will remain that forever. Past tense is not applicable and present tense is called for.
 
::::*The ''[[Locust]]'' ''is'', not ''was'', a 20-ton 'Mech and will remain that forever. Past tense is not applicable and present tense is called for.
::::*For OOC articles the same principles apply: [[Far Country]] should be covered in present tense, as should be the plot summary. However, if you would create an article about the ''Telendine'', a specific IC JumpShip that has been lost, you would revert to past tense again because the Telendine is no more and the events leading to its loss are a thing of the past. See ''[[Liberator (Individual JumpShip)|Liberator]]'' as a case in point.
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::::*For OOC articles the same principles apply: [[Far Country]] should be covered in present tense, as should be the plot summary. However, if you would create an article about the ''Telendine'', a specific IC JumpShip that has been lost, you would revert to past tense again because the Telendine is no more and the events leading to its loss are a thing of the past. See ''[[Liberator]]'' as a case in point.
 
::::To sum it up, only events (which occurr at a certain point in time) should be referred to in past tense, and only if they are already over. Similarly, specific/individual vehicles or people should be treated in past tense if they are lost/dead/whatever and the article is looking back. Everything else should be written in present tense.
 
::::To sum it up, only events (which occurr at a certain point in time) should be referred to in past tense, and only if they are already over. Similarly, specific/individual vehicles or people should be treated in past tense if they are lost/dead/whatever and the article is looking back. Everything else should be written in present tense.
 
::::As for timelines, the latest bit of information always sets the viewpoint. Anything else would not make sense because you would otherwise end up reporting on future events. I'd like to add here that, as a contributor and BTW author, I consider myself a real person outside of any BT timeline. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] 14:41, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
 
::::As for timelines, the latest bit of information always sets the viewpoint. Anything else would not make sense because you would otherwise end up reporting on future events. I'd like to add here that, as a contributor and BTW author, I consider myself a real person outside of any BT timeline. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] 14:41, 10 August 2009 (UTC)
:::::Based on that last statement, now I am confused. It seems then that tenses change dependent upon what type of in-character (i.e., a subject not in the Real World, like [[FASA]] or [[Randall Bills]], but [[Illium Naval Engineering|Illium Shipyards]] and [[Kai Allard-Liao]]) article is being written: dead, alive, presumed dead/missing, currently utilized, currently active, destroyed. So are we writing from the perspective of 3076? Or are we writing from 3139 (as Dark Age stories are being written for BattleCorps)? Some subjects exist in 'the now' in both time lines. An Editor writing from the perspective of the MechWarrior video game reboot may talk about the invasion of [[Deshler]] as it is happening now, while if Deshler is the subject of Jihad Turning Points: 3078, then it too will be present tense. Plus the assassination of Lord Muckety-Muck in 3140 on Deshler is also present tense. The reader could be quite confused.  
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:::::Based on that last statement, now I am confused. It seems then that tenses change dependent upon what type of in-character (i.e., a subject not in the Real World, like [[FASA]] or [[Randall Bills]], but [[Illium Shipyards]] and [[Kai Allard-Liao]]) article is being written: dead, alive, presumed dead/missing, currently utilized, currently active, destroyed. So are we writing from the perspective of 3076? Or are we writing from 3139 (as Dark Age stories are being written for BattleCorps)? Some subjects exist in 'the now' in both time lines. An Editor writing from the perspective of the MechWarrior video game reboot may talk about the invasion of [[Deshler]] as it is happening now, while if Deshler is the subject of Jihad Turning Points: 3078, then it too will be present tense. Plus the assassination of Lord Muckety-Muck in 3140 on Deshler is also present tense. The reader could be quite confused.  
 
:::::Yes, I am a real person, and I, even as an admin, would see numerous discussions taking place as to whether or not the tense was correct, depending on each particular Editor's POV. As a contributor, as well as an admin, I'm not interested in mediating such debates as to which takes precendence 'this time' for 'this article', when it can be solved with a simple policy of 'this happened then.' To be honest, as a historian yourself, I'd have thought you'd prefer the past-tense.
 
:::::Yes, I am a real person, and I, even as an admin, would see numerous discussions taking place as to whether or not the tense was correct, depending on each particular Editor's POV. As a contributor, as well as an admin, I'm not interested in mediating such debates as to which takes precendence 'this time' for 'this article', when it can be solved with a simple policy of 'this happened then.' To be honest, as a historian yourself, I'd have thought you'd prefer the past-tense.
 
:::::I understand your point about the ''Locust''. WP does something similar, writing about a current tank (M1A1) in the present tense, while using the past tense for the M4. But, I don't see the downside in writing from the past tense for any article.  
 
:::::I understand your point about the ''Locust''. WP does something similar, writing about a current tank (M1A1) in the present tense, while using the past tense for the M4. But, I don't see the downside in writing from the past tense for any article.  
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Related to an active discussion on Discord, I am crafting a section in regards to date formats to add to this manual.  Please feel free to comment and suggest revisions.  I have some questions that I will pose here once I have included the current draft.  --[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 21:01, 6 November 2022 (EST)
 
Related to an active discussion on Discord, I am crafting a section in regards to date formats to add to this manual.  Please feel free to comment and suggest revisions.  I have some questions that I will pose here once I have included the current draft.  --[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 21:01, 6 November 2022 (EST)
 
Actually I will add the draft here, not in the article itself, at least until the final version is settled.
 
 
:* If a numerical format is required, such as for tables or contexts where conciseness or the ability to sort is needed, use YYYY-MM-DD (extended ISO format).  Where the day is omitted, use YYYY-MM.  Where the day and month is omitted use YYYY.
 
:: ''Ex: 2022-11-06, 2022-11, and 2022''
 
:* Full dates are formatted Month DD, YYYY or DD Month YYYY (e.g., November 6, 2022 or 6 November 2022), using the date format of the context most closely tied to the article.  The same date format should be used throughout an article.
 
:**For articles concerning real-life events and products, the default date format is American date format (month first) (e.g., November 6, 2022).  [For articles that are strongly and solely tied to the real life events or products occurring in another country or a context (such as the American military) that employs a different date format, the date format of that context may be used.]
 
:**For articles concerning in-universe background and events, that date format typical to the source or in-universe context should be used.
 
:* Dates that are part of titles or quotations should be left in their original format.
 
 
 
I have two questions
 
 
1) Should the bracketed exception clause under point 2, subppoint 1, be included or omitted?  I am open to that type of exception, but I also understand that it could complicate things.  (We do have some pages that concern foreign language products, but we also have some pages like the individual novel pages that with concern both American and foreign versions. The latter should definitely stick with the default.  Also we have pages about real-life people and it could be argued whether the person's country of domicile might affect date formatting.  So the situation could potentially grow hairy.  Removing this explicit exception clause might simplify things.)
 
 
2) Do we have a conclusive picture of what the in-universe date formatting looks like?  Is such consistent? Can we make the point 2, subpoint 2 more complete?
 
 
 
--[[User:Dude RB|Dude RB]] ([[User talk:Dude RB|talk]]) 21:15, 6 November 2022 (EST)
 
 
== CGL excerpt ==
 
 
Looks like ''touman'' is never capitalised but is always italicised, judging by the excerpt. This directly contradicts use in some recent products where the opposite is used when referring to it in operation: Clan Fluffy Slippers' ''touman'' but the Clan Fluffy Bunny Slippers Touman, always a clumsy distinction.
 
 
Should we assume the excerpt is definitive? [[User:Madness Divine|Madness Divine]] ([[User talk:Madness Divine|talk]]) 18:42, 1 December 2022 (EST)
 
:I agree it's somewhat weird and counterintuitive, but yes. The Writer's Bible is explicit in this case. Clan formations are capitalized, ''touman'' is not but is always italicized. And yes, even CGL editors don't always heed the rules 100% on this. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 02:44, 2 December 2022 (EST)
 
 
== Either versus Each ==
 
I have just made an edit to the Flashman Battlemech page.
 
 
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These are backed up by five Ichiba 3000 medium lasers, two mounted in either arm coaxial to the large lasers, one in either side torso, and one which is mounted in the rear of the 'Mech to ward off attackers.
 
 
This could imply that two medium lasers can be mounted in '''either''' the left or the right arm and one in either the left torso '''or''' the right torso.
 
 
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These are backed up by five Ichiba 3000 medium lasers, one mounted in each arm coaxial to the large lasers, one in each side torso, and one which is mounted in the rear of the 'Mech to ward off attackers.
 
 
To avoid ambiguity: '''Either''' should always be used in the sense of an alternative and should be accompanied by '''or''', except in the most informal usage.
 

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