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Line 15: ==Plot summary== ==Plot summary== − On Sudeten 9 January 3152, Alexis Zarnofsky and her ''sibkin'' are fighting their [[Trial of Position]] into their new Clan, the Jade Falcons. Daniel, her ''sibkin'' but also worst enemy, fights his Trial in simulators. Alexis, meanwhile, recalled her childhood on the streets of Antimony, Quarell and how her group of children planned a theft of a Ghost Bear officer. The children send Alexis, promising to help her if she was in trouble. But when the Clanner discovered and caught her, Alexis' friends simple left her. The Ghost Bear warrior, Star Colonel Aoi Bekker, laughed at Alexis' pretenses to have a family, and took her to an interview room, where Alexis' determination to not eat biscuits from a plate wasn't strong enough to keep her from eating them all. + On Sudeten, the 9 January 3152, Alexis Zarnofsky and her ''sibkins'' are fighting their [[Trial of Position]] into their new Clan, the Jade Falcons. Daniel, her sibkin but also worst enemy, fights his Trial in simulators. She, meanwhile, remembered her infancy on the streets of Antimony, Quarell. How her group of childrens planned a theft of a Ghost Bear officer. They send Alexis, promising to help her if she was in trouble, but when the clanner uncovered her and catch her, Alexis' ''friends'' simple left her alone. The Bear, Star Colonel Aoi Bekker, laugh of Alexis' pretenses to have a family, and took her to a interview room. Alexis' determination to don't eat biscuits from a plate wasn't strong enough, so she eat them all. − + After Alexis' attention returned to the present, she saw than Daniel had won... barely: he had attained one kill before ''dying'', which made him a warrior. Then it was Alexis' turn to fight. − After Alexis' attention returned to the present, she saw that Daniel had barely won. He had attained one kill before getting shot down, which made him a warrior. Then it was Alexis' turn to fight. + She played a cat-and-mouse game with a ''Rifleman'', managing to down him, but at a high cost: her ''Sacage Wolf'' armor was in shambles. − + However, despite having become a warrior too, Alexis refused to stop, and chased her second opponent. Both savaged each other, until her simulator turned off. − Alexis played a cat-and-mouse game with a ''Rifleman'', managing to down him, but at a high cost to the armor on her ''Savage Wolf''.+ Alexis remembered how, on Antimony, the Star Colonel promised her a real family, and an opportunity to become a warrior. The next day, she took her to a ''sibko'' training facility, presenting Alexis to her trainer. She too met her sibkins, receiving open hostility from one, Daniel, but also a warm welcome from others, telling her clearly than reaching her goal won't be easy. − Despite just having become a warrior too as a result of the kill, Alexis refused to stop and chased her second opponent, a ''Phoenix Hawk''. Both fought each other until her simulator turned off.+ On Sudeten, Alexis emerged from her simulator, surprised when everybody was aplauding her. To her surprise, before ''dying'', she had managed to ''kill'' the Phoenix Hawk pilot, which made her a [[Star Commander]]. Even Daniel was friendly with her, to her surprise, but even more when Khan Chistu personally congratulated her nad said he expected great things from her. − + Alexis felt happy, knowing than now, she really was at the right place and had a real family. − Alexis remembered how, on Antimony, the Star Colonel promised her a real family and an opportunity to become a warrior. The next day, the warrior took her to a ''sibko'' training facility, presenting Alexis to her trainer. She too met her ''sibkin'' and received a warm welcome. One member of the ''sibko'', Daniel, met her with open hostility. Alexis realized that reaching her goal won't be easy. − − On Sudeten, Alexis emerged from her simulator and was surprised when everybody was applauding her. To her amazement, before being shot down, she had managed to kill the ''Phoenix Hawk'' she was fighting, which made her a [[Star Commander]]. Even Daniel was friendly with her. Alexis was even more surprised when Khan Chistu personally congratulated her and said he expected great things from her. − − Alexis felt happy knowing that now she really was at the right place and had a real family. ==Featured characters== ==Featured characters==
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==Plot summary== | ==Plot summary== | ||
| − | On Sudeten | + | On Sudeten, the 9 January 3152, Alexis Zarnofsky and her ''sibkins'' are fighting their [[Trial of Position]] into their new Clan, the Jade Falcons. Daniel, her sibkin but also worst enemy, fights his Trial in simulators. She, meanwhile, remembered her infancy on the streets of Antimony, Quarell. How her group of childrens planned a theft of a Ghost Bear officer. They send Alexis, promising to help her if she was in trouble, but when the clanner uncovered her and catch her, Alexis' ''friends'' simple left her alone. The Bear, Star Colonel Aoi Bekker, laugh of Alexis' pretenses to have a family, and took her to a interview room. Alexis' determination to don't eat biscuits from a plate wasn't strong enough, so she eat them all. |
| − | + | After Alexis' attention returned to the present, she saw than Daniel had won... barely: he had attained one kill before ''dying'', which made him a warrior. Then it was Alexis' turn to fight. | |
| − | After Alexis' attention returned to the present, she saw | + | She played a cat-and-mouse game with a ''Rifleman'', managing to down him, but at a high cost: her ''Sacage Wolf'' armor was in shambles. |
| − | + | However, despite having become a warrior too, Alexis refused to stop, and chased her second opponent. Both savaged each other, until her simulator turned off. | |
| − | + | Alexis remembered how, on Antimony, the Star Colonel promised her a real family, and an opportunity to become a warrior. The next day, she took her to a ''sibko'' training facility, presenting Alexis to her trainer. She too met her sibkins, receiving open hostility from one, Daniel, but also a warm welcome from others, telling her clearly than reaching her goal won't be easy. | |
| − | + | On Sudeten, Alexis emerged from her simulator, surprised when everybody was aplauding her. To her surprise, before ''dying'', she had managed to ''kill'' the Phoenix Hawk pilot, which made her a [[Star Commander]]. Even Daniel was friendly with her, to her surprise, but even more when Khan Chistu personally congratulated her nad said he expected great things from her. | |
| − | + | Alexis felt happy, knowing than now, she really was at the right place and had a real family. | |
| − | Alexis remembered how, on Antimony, the Star Colonel promised her a real family and an opportunity to become a warrior. The next day, | ||
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| − | On Sudeten, Alexis emerged from her simulator | ||
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| − | Alexis felt happy knowing | ||
==Featured characters== | ==Featured characters== | ||