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Line 19: ==History== ==History== − Ziven reached the rank of [[Star Commander]] as warrior, but after his 'Mech suffered multiple ammo explosions, he lost control of his body's left side. His clan get rid of him sending him to a place where nobody wanted to be: into ''Grayrock Detention facility'', on [[Cusset]]. There he met the special ops ''Hautman'' of the [[Lyran Commonwealth]] [[Laila Renwick]], and apparently both developed a friendly relationship. The 11 May [[3150]], when ''ristar'' Star Captain [[Peter Cobb]] arrived to take Laila as ''bondswoman'', Peter not only treated Ziven with respect, but also accepted Laila's personal favor to help Ziven to get out of the place.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 4</ref> + Ziven reached the rank of [[Star Commander]] as warrior, but after his 'Mech suffered multiple ammo explosions, he lost control of his body's left side. His clan get rid of him sending him to a place where nobody wanted to be: into ''Grayrock Detention facility'', on [[Cusset]]. there he met the special ops ''Hautman'' of the [[Lyran Commonwealth]] [[Laila Renwick]], and apparently both developed a friendly relationship. The 11 May [[3150]], when ''ristar'' Star Captain [[Peter Cobb]] arrived to take Laila as ''bondswoman'', Peter not only treated Ziven with respect, but also accepted Laila's personal favor to help Ziven to get out of the place.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 4</ref> Peter moved Ziven to work as a trainer in the sibko Training base Alpha-9, where he met him in a visit the 30 October. On September [[3152]], Peter had became Star Colonel, leading [[First Horde Cluster (Clan Hell's Horses)]], and Ziven, under his command, Star Captain, and worked as his aide, commanding a Trinary from a tank. He retained his friendship with Laila, playing virtual chess with her often.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 15-40</ref> Peter moved Ziven to work as a trainer in the sibko Training base Alpha-9, where he met him in a visit the 30 October. On September [[3152]], Peter had became Star Colonel, leading [[First Horde Cluster (Clan Hell's Horses)]], and Ziven, under his command, Star Captain, and worked as his aide, commanding a Trinary from a tank. He retained his friendship with Laila, playing virtual chess with her often.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 15-40</ref> Line 34:
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| − | Ziven reached the rank of [[Star Commander]] as warrior, but after his 'Mech suffered multiple ammo explosions, he lost control of his body's left side. His clan get rid of him sending him to a place where nobody wanted to be: into ''Grayrock Detention facility'', on [[Cusset]]. | + | Ziven reached the rank of [[Star Commander]] as warrior, but after his 'Mech suffered multiple ammo explosions, he lost control of his body's left side. His clan get rid of him sending him to a place where nobody wanted to be: into ''Grayrock Detention facility'', on [[Cusset]]. there he met the special ops ''Hautman'' of the [[Lyran Commonwealth]] [[Laila Renwick]], and apparently both developed a friendly relationship. The 11 May [[3150]], when ''ristar'' Star Captain [[Peter Cobb]] arrived to take Laila as ''bondswoman'', Peter not only treated Ziven with respect, but also accepted Laila's personal favor to help Ziven to get out of the place.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 4</ref> |
Peter moved Ziven to work as a trainer in the sibko Training base Alpha-9, where he met him in a visit the 30 October. On September [[3152]], Peter had became Star Colonel, leading [[First Horde Cluster (Clan Hell's Horses)]], and Ziven, under his command, Star Captain, and worked as his aide, commanding a Trinary from a tank. He retained his friendship with Laila, playing virtual chess with her often.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 15-40</ref> | Peter moved Ziven to work as a trainer in the sibko Training base Alpha-9, where he met him in a visit the 30 October. On September [[3152]], Peter had became Star Colonel, leading [[First Horde Cluster (Clan Hell's Horses)]], and Ziven, under his command, Star Captain, and worked as his aide, commanding a Trinary from a tank. He retained his friendship with Laila, playing virtual chess with her often.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 15-40</ref> | ||
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