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Line 28: The 12 September, Daniel attempted to frame Alexis placing his codex into her footlocker, but only managed to get both punished. After Alexis was released, a day later, Thomasin knocked him out for what he had done to her.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 8-10</ref> The 12 September, Daniel attempted to frame Alexis placing his codex into her footlocker, but only managed to get both punished. After Alexis was released, a day later, Thomasin knocked him out for what he had done to her.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 8-10</ref> − The 10 October, a great cross-training series of exercises began on Quarell, and Alexis was chosen by Star Commander Diego to led their group, to Daniel's surprise. Alexis' strategy almost led her ''sibko'' top victory, with Daniel being the only giving problems, and the victory wasn't achieved only for his indiscipline.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 16</ref> + The 10 October, a great cross-training series of exercices began on Quarell, and Alexis was choosen by Star Commander Diego to led their group, to Daniel's surprise. Alexis' strategy almost led her ''sibko'' top victory, with Daniel being the only giving problems, and the victory wasn't achieved only for his indiscipline.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 16</ref> The next exercise, the 26 October, was an infiltration one in a delta. Once again, Daniel refused to obey her orders, and took several sibkins. Alexis took the rest and won the exercise using cunning tactics, winning easily. The next exercise, the 26 October, was an infiltration one in a delta. Once again, Daniel refused to obey her orders, and took several sibkins. Alexis took the rest and won the exercise using cunning tactics, winning easily. − Days later, their sibko faced another field exercise, these piloting real 'Mechs, the 6 November. Their mission was to protect a town, Feldspar, against an attack. Alexis prepared a solid defense plan... but Daniel's disobedience made harder the defense, which resulted and both forces having the same points. The question remained unsolved, as a group of [[Clan Jade Falcon Remnants]] led by Khan [[Jiyi Chistu]] arrived on system, declaring a [[Trial of Possession]] for all cadets participating on exercises.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 18-22</ref> + Days later, their sibko faced another field exercise, these piloting real 'Mechs, the 6 November. Their mission was to protect a town, Feldspar, against an attack. Alexis prepared a solid defense plan... but Daniel's disobedience made harder the defense, which resulted and both forces having the same points. The question remained unsolved, as a group of [[Clan Jade Falcon Remnants]] led by Khan [[Jiyi Chistu]] arrived on system, declaring a [[Trial of Possession]] for all cadets participating on exercices.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 18-22</ref> Alexis and her friends didn't want to be taken, so they enlisted Daniel's help to allow her to escape and attempt to declare a [[Trial of Refusal]] against the Trial of Possession, but Colonel [[Emilio Hall]] didn't acknowledge their Trial. All involved cadets were arrested and washed out from the Clan, with all insignias taken off, which hurt deeply Alexis and Daniel.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 30</ref> Alexis and her friends didn't want to be taken, so they enlisted Daniel's help to allow her to escape and attempt to declare a [[Trial of Refusal]] against the Trial of Possession, but Colonel [[Emilio Hall]] didn't acknowledge their Trial. All involved cadets were arrested and washed out from the Clan, with all insignias taken off, which hurt deeply Alexis and Daniel.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 30</ref> Line 40:
Line 40: Once in Sudeten, Alexis reunited with Thomasin and Daniel, and Dawn welcomed her into their new family. Once in Sudeten, Alexis reunited with Thomasin and Daniel, and Dawn welcomed her into their new family. Alexis assisted, the 9 January 3152, to Daniel' Trial of Position. When the first was fighting, Dawn asked Alexis' opinion about the fight. When Daniel won barely the rank of Warrior, Dawn congratulated him, but also told him than he would have made better. Alexis assisted, the 9 January 3152, to Daniel' Trial of Position. When the first was fighting, Dawn asked Alexis' opinion about the fight. When Daniel won barely the rank of Warrior, Dawn congratulated him, but also told him than he would have made better. − Alexis was the next one. Her first opponent, a [[Rifleman]], proved to be a cunning opponent, eluding her in a labyrinth, damaging her 'Mech, but she charged him and managed to down the first opponent. His 'Mech was seriously damaged, but she continued, facing the second opponent, a [[Phoenix Hawk IIC]]. His pilot was too cunning, but eventually both faced in a frontal fight, and she unleashed all her weapons on her opponent, which downed her. To her surprise, after leaving the simulator, everybody was applauding and congratulating her, even Daniel, which was very proud of her. Alexis' last shoots, before ''dying'', had ''killed'' the Phoenix Hawk pilot. Alexis had won the rank of Star Commander. Dawn gave the young one an embrace. Khan Chistu personally congratulated her, and ordered Dawn to give Alexis a [[Turkina]] as 'Mech, and to let her choose the warriors in her [[Star]].<ref>''Ghostbird'' in ''Shrapnel#11'' </ref> + Alexis was the next one. Her first opponent, a [[Rifleman]], proved to be a cunning opponent, eluding her in a labyrinth, damaging her 'Mech, but she charged him and managed to down the first opponent. His 'Mech was seriousaly damaged, but she continued, facing the second opponent, a [[Phoenix Hawk IIC]]. His pilot was too cunning, but eventually both faced in a frontal fight, and she unleasheda ll her weapons on her opponent, which downed her. To her surprise, after leaving the simulator, everybody was applauding and congratulating her, even Daniel, which was very proud of her. Alexis' last shoots, before ''dying'', had ''killed'' the Phoenix Hawk pilot. Alexis had won the rank of Star Commander. Dawn gave the young one an embrace. Khan Chistu personally congratulated her, and ordered Dawn to give Alexis a [[Turkina]] as 'Mech, and to let her choose the warriors in her [[Star]].<ref>''Ghostbird'' in ''Shrapnel#11'' </ref> ==BattleMech== ==BattleMech==
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The 12 September, Daniel attempted to frame Alexis placing his codex into her footlocker, but only managed to get both punished. After Alexis was released, a day later, Thomasin knocked him out for what he had done to her.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 8-10</ref> | The 12 September, Daniel attempted to frame Alexis placing his codex into her footlocker, but only managed to get both punished. After Alexis was released, a day later, Thomasin knocked him out for what he had done to her.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 8-10</ref> | ||
| − | The 10 October, a great cross-training series of | + | The 10 October, a great cross-training series of exercices began on Quarell, and Alexis was choosen by Star Commander Diego to led their group, to Daniel's surprise. Alexis' strategy almost led her ''sibko'' top victory, with Daniel being the only giving problems, and the victory wasn't achieved only for his indiscipline.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 16</ref> |
The next exercise, the 26 October, was an infiltration one in a delta. Once again, Daniel refused to obey her orders, and took several sibkins. Alexis took the rest and won the exercise using cunning tactics, winning easily. | The next exercise, the 26 October, was an infiltration one in a delta. Once again, Daniel refused to obey her orders, and took several sibkins. Alexis took the rest and won the exercise using cunning tactics, winning easily. | ||
| − | Days later, their sibko faced another field exercise, these piloting real 'Mechs, the 6 November. Their mission was to protect a town, Feldspar, against an attack. Alexis prepared a solid defense plan... but Daniel's disobedience made harder the defense, which resulted and both forces having the same points. The question remained unsolved, as a group of [[Clan Jade Falcon Remnants]] led by Khan [[Jiyi Chistu]] arrived on system, declaring a [[Trial of Possession]] for all cadets participating on | + | Days later, their sibko faced another field exercise, these piloting real 'Mechs, the 6 November. Their mission was to protect a town, Feldspar, against an attack. Alexis prepared a solid defense plan... but Daniel's disobedience made harder the defense, which resulted and both forces having the same points. The question remained unsolved, as a group of [[Clan Jade Falcon Remnants]] led by Khan [[Jiyi Chistu]] arrived on system, declaring a [[Trial of Possession]] for all cadets participating on exercices.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 18-22</ref> |
Alexis and her friends didn't want to be taken, so they enlisted Daniel's help to allow her to escape and attempt to declare a [[Trial of Refusal]] against the Trial of Possession, but Colonel [[Emilio Hall]] didn't acknowledge their Trial. All involved cadets were arrested and washed out from the Clan, with all insignias taken off, which hurt deeply Alexis and Daniel.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 30</ref> | Alexis and her friends didn't want to be taken, so they enlisted Daniel's help to allow her to escape and attempt to declare a [[Trial of Refusal]] against the Trial of Possession, but Colonel [[Emilio Hall]] didn't acknowledge their Trial. All involved cadets were arrested and washed out from the Clan, with all insignias taken off, which hurt deeply Alexis and Daniel.<ref>''A Question of Survival'' ch. 30</ref> | ||
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Once in Sudeten, Alexis reunited with Thomasin and Daniel, and Dawn welcomed her into their new family. | Once in Sudeten, Alexis reunited with Thomasin and Daniel, and Dawn welcomed her into their new family. | ||
Alexis assisted, the 9 January 3152, to Daniel' Trial of Position. When the first was fighting, Dawn asked Alexis' opinion about the fight. When Daniel won barely the rank of Warrior, Dawn congratulated him, but also told him than he would have made better. | Alexis assisted, the 9 January 3152, to Daniel' Trial of Position. When the first was fighting, Dawn asked Alexis' opinion about the fight. When Daniel won barely the rank of Warrior, Dawn congratulated him, but also told him than he would have made better. | ||
| − | Alexis was the next one. Her first opponent, a [[Rifleman]], proved to be a cunning opponent, eluding her in a labyrinth, damaging her 'Mech, but she charged him and managed to down the first opponent. His 'Mech was | + | Alexis was the next one. Her first opponent, a [[Rifleman]], proved to be a cunning opponent, eluding her in a labyrinth, damaging her 'Mech, but she charged him and managed to down the first opponent. His 'Mech was seriousaly damaged, but she continued, facing the second opponent, a [[Phoenix Hawk IIC]]. His pilot was too cunning, but eventually both faced in a frontal fight, and she unleasheda ll her weapons on her opponent, which downed her. To her surprise, after leaving the simulator, everybody was applauding and congratulating her, even Daniel, which was very proud of her. Alexis' last shoots, before ''dying'', had ''killed'' the Phoenix Hawk pilot. Alexis had won the rank of Star Commander. Dawn gave the young one an embrace. Khan Chistu personally congratulated her, and ordered Dawn to give Alexis a [[Turkina]] as 'Mech, and to let her choose the warriors in her [[Star]].<ref>''Ghostbird'' in ''Shrapnel#11'' </ref> |
==BattleMech== | ==BattleMech== | ||