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| ISBN10              = 3890644589
 
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| era                = [[Star League era]]
 
| era                = [[Star League era]]
| timeline            = 19 April [[2604]] - 01 May [[2605]]
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| timeline            = 19 April [[2604]]—01 May [[2605]]
 
| series              = [[Classic BattleTech Novels]]
 
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== Plot Summary ==
 
== Plot Summary ==
[[Captain-General of the Free Worlds League|Captain-General]] [[Brion Marik II]] sends his trusted personal friend, military inspector Katharina Wlaschek, to Tamarind with orders to inspect the local militia. The true reason is that Brion Marik's father-in-law, who lives on Tamarind, is terminally ill; Wlaschek is known to travel with her granddaughter, and the Captain-General wants her to take his son Thomas (''apparently referring to his grandson Tomas; see Notes below'') along incognito to see his great-grandfather one last time.
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[[Captain-General]] [[Brion Marik II]] sends his trusted personal friend, military inspector Katharina Wlaschek, to Tamarind with orders to inspect the local militia. The true reason is that Brion Marik's father-in-law, who lives on Tamarind, is terminally ill; Wlaschek is known to travel with her granddaughter, and the Captain-General wants her to take his son Thomas (''apparently referring to his grandson Tomas; see Notes below'') along incognito to see his great-grandfather one last time.
  
The plan is overheard by a spy from the [[Exituri]] sect who reports to his superior in the sect hierarchy, [[Lieutenant General]] Maurice Dekobra, aboard a [[WarShip]] orbiting [[Atreus (FWL)|Atreus]]. Through the Exituri and their network of henchmen, Dekobra hopes to kidnap the young Marik scion and use him as a hostage to enforce recognition for his sect from the Captain-General.
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The plan is overheard by a spy from the [[Exituri]] sect who reports to his superior in the sect hierachy, [[Lieutenant General]] Maurice Dekobra, aboard a [[WarShip]] orbiting [[Atreus]]. Through the Exituri and their network of henchmen, Dekobra hopes to kidnap the young Marik scion and use him as a hostage to enforce recognition for his sect from the Captain-General.
  
150 sleeper agents are activated and trickle into Tamarind's capital city (also named Tamarind) over the upcoming months, blackmailed by their unknown master with various sins and crimes from their past such as illegal immigration, identity theft, fraud, and running a child porn network. Unaware of each other, they include common people as well as prominent individuals like the mayor of Tamarind City, his assistant and a police colonel. Combined, their individual orders—various acts of mischief, sabotage, murder and a bank heist—congeal into an intricate plan to sow chaos and civil unrest in the city on 2 April 2605, culminating in a nightly curfew. The general chaos, combined with supporting actions from the sleeper agents, allows groups of highly trained mercenary operatives to seize the planet's sole radio transmitter station, the militia barracks and the police headquarters in clandestine actions and impersonate the staff to pretend business as usual. Their ultimate plan is to trap the inbound [[DropShip]] ''Gustav Meyrink'', which is carrying inspector Wlaschek and the young Marik scion, upon landing. (Dekobra's true plan is to be called to Tamarind with his WarShip in response, where he intends to become a hero by rescuing the young Marik heir from the religious fanatics, covering up his involvement by leaving no survivors among his henchmen, then have Brion Marik assassinated and be named his successor; it is implied that Dekobra was also responsible for the recent assassination of [[Albrecht Marik]].)
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150 sleeper agents are activated and trickle into Tamarind's capital city (also named Tamarind) over the upcoming months, blackmailed by their unknown master with various sins and crimes from their past such as illegal immigration, identity theft, fraud, and running a child porn network. Unawares of each other, they include common people as well as prominent individuals like the mayor of Tamarind City, his assistant and a police colonel. Combined, their individual orders—various acts of mischief, sabotage, murder and a bank heist—congeal into an intricate plan to sow chaos and civil unrest in the city on 2 April 2605, culminating in a nightly curfew. The general chaos, combined with supporting actions from the sleeper agents, allows groups of highly trained mercenary operatives to seize the planet's sole radio transmitter station, the militia barracks and the police headquarters in clandestine actions and impersonate the staff to pretend business as usual. Their ultimate plan is to trap the inbound [[DropShip]] ''Gustav Meyrink'', which is carrying inspector Wlaschek and the young Marik scion, upon landing. (Dekobra's true plan is to be called to Tamarind with his WarShip in response, where he intents to become a hero by rescuing the young Marik heir from the religious fanatics, cover up his involvement by leaving no survivors among his henchmen, then have Brion Marik assassinated and be named his successor; it is implied that Dekobra was also responsible for the recent assassination of [[Albrecht Marik]].)
  
The capture of the radio station goes smoothly. In the militia barracks, meanwhile, [[Captain]] Jiri Orten realizes what is going on and escapes an attempt to apprehend him. He races to meet a friend, [[Lieutenant]] Esah Ts'gna, who is celebrating his 35th birthday elsewhere that night. There, the assembled officers refuse to believe Orten's story, and [[Colonel]] Marlattow orders Lieutenants Cumrow and Lippinsky to "escort" Orten when they move out in two jeeps to investigate just to be sure. En route, Orten's jeep picks up Captain Egon Hostovsky and then they witness how uniformed strangers at the barracks gate arrest the officers in the other jeep, convincing the others that Orten's story might be true after all. Hostovsky, being the most experienced and also a trained special operations agent, assumes command of the group. Amidst the ongoing firefighting efforts following explosions and the collapse of the 'Mech hangars, Hostovsky and Cumrow find evidence of sabotage and overhear two mercenaries discussing their capture of the barracks, the planned capture of a Marik scion and the prisoners held hostage in the gym to ensure the cooperation of the militia commander.
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The capture of the radio station goes smoothly. In the militia barracks, meanwhile, [[Captain]] Jiri Orten realizes what is going on and escapes an attempt to apprehend him. He races to meet a friend, [[Lieutenant]] Esah Ts'gna, who is celebrating his 35th birthday elsewhere that night. There, the assembled officers refuse to believe Orten's story, and [[Colonel]] Marlattow orders Lieutenants Cumrow and Lippinsky to "escort" Orten when they move out in two jeeps to investigate just to be sure. Enroute, Orten's jeep picks up Captain Egon Hostovsky and then they witness how the unknown guards at the barracks gate arrest the officers in the other jeep, convincing the others that Orten's story might be true after all. Hostovsky, being the most experienced and also a trained special operations agent, assumes command of the group. Amidst the ongoing firefighting efforts following explosions and the collapse of the 'Mech hangars, Hostovsky and Cumrow find evidence of sabotage and overhear two mercenaries discussing their capture of the barracks, the planned capture of a Marik scion and the prisoners held hostage in the gym to ensure the cooperation of the militia commander.
  
Two days later, the explosion in the militia barracks is downplayed as an accidental fuel dump explosion in the news. Ostensibly to prevent the involvement of military forces in the ongoing riots, the militia was ordered to stand down and keep the barracks gates closed; Orten is called upon to report for duty in public media. Hostovsky unsuccessfully tries to contact the secret service and an attempt to find other militia soldiers also fails.
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Two days later, the explosion in the militia barracks is downplayed as an accidential fuel dump explosion in the news. Ostensibly to prevent the involvement of military forces in the ongoing riots, the militia was ordered to stand down and keep the barracks gates closed; Orten is called upon to report for duty in public media. Hostovsky unsuccessfully tries to contact the secret service and an attempt to find other militia soldiers also fails.
  
 
Desperate for allies, Orten then introduces them to a friend: Ota Pavel, an ex-[[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]] who now owns a rundown combined tech workshop, garage and scrapyard. It turns out that Pavel is an associate of the ''Freunde der Mechs'' (''"Mech Friends"''), a group of youngsters sharing a fascination for [[BattleMech]]s, and that they are working on refurbishing a functional ''[[Clint]]'' from individual scrap parts. With Ota's help the officers convince the group to assemble the 'Mech and help in simultaneous attacks on the barracks and radio station. To this end, they have to obtain numerous parts from across Tamarind during the curfew, including obtaining a cockpit from a private museum across the sea; ''Mech Friend'' Karel Polacek works for a shipping enterprise and can convince his boss to help them.
 
Desperate for allies, Orten then introduces them to a friend: Ota Pavel, an ex-[[MechWarrior (pilot)|MechWarrior]] who now owns a rundown combined tech workshop, garage and scrapyard. It turns out that Pavel is an associate of the ''Freunde der Mechs'' (''"Mech Friends"''), a group of youngsters sharing a fascination for [[BattleMech]]s, and that they are working on refurbishing a functional ''[[Clint]]'' from individual scrap parts. With Ota's help the officers convince the group to assemble the 'Mech and help in simultaneous attacks on the barracks and radio station. To this end, they have to obtain numerous parts from across Tamarind during the curfew, including obtaining a cockpit from a private museum across the sea; ''Mech Friend'' Karel Polacek works for a shipping enterprise and can convince his boss to help them.
  
Orten then contacts the tiny planetary navy, correctly assuming that they are too small and unimportant to be involved in the kidnapping ploy. He manages to convince the navy commander of the situation, gaining her support and a contingent of troops. Meanwhile, Hostovsky calls in a favor from a crime lord who owes him a favor, and also gains a detachment of trained combat personnel for the planned mission.
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Orten then contacts the tiny planetary navy, correctly assuming that they are too small and unimportant to be involved in the kidnapping ploy. He manages to convince the navy commander of the situation, gaining her support and a contingent of troops. Meanwhile, Hostovsky calls in a favor from a crimelord who owes him a favor, and also gains a detachment of trained combat personnel for the planned mission.
  
 
On 8 April 2605 the attacks are launched. Because of a traitor among the soldiers (implied to come from among the navy forces), the assembly site of the ''Clint'' in an abandoned industrial area comes under attack from mercenaries just as cranes pull the ''Clint'' upright and Cumrow, who was to pilot the 'Mech, is wounded in a shootout. With Cumrow disabled, ''Mech Friend'' Arpan Kodicek tries to fill in for him and is quickly joined by Karel Polacek. However, due to his lack of proper training they cannot adequately support the attack on the barracks which is led by Lippinsky. The ineptly piloted 'Mech breaches the wall for the navy APCs, but is then quickly defeated by militia tanks. Local news media observe the battle and report on it.
 
On 8 April 2605 the attacks are launched. Because of a traitor among the soldiers (implied to come from among the navy forces), the assembly site of the ''Clint'' in an abandoned industrial area comes under attack from mercenaries just as cranes pull the ''Clint'' upright and Cumrow, who was to pilot the 'Mech, is wounded in a shootout. With Cumrow disabled, ''Mech Friend'' Arpan Kodicek tries to fill in for him and is quickly joined by Karel Polacek. However, due to his lack of proper training they cannot adequately support the attack on the barracks which is led by Lippinsky. The ineptly piloted 'Mech breaches the wall for the navy APCs, but is then quickly defeated by militia tanks. Local news media observe the battle and report on it.
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*[[Lieutenant-General]] '''Maurice Dekobra''': Exituri member, but in fact also the leader of a small, secret and apparently prosecuted sect of [[w:Skoptsy|Skopze]] that has infiltrated the Exituri ranks and aims to use them as disposable terror tools because they do not truly share their religious convictions. The Skopze aim to blame the atrocities committed on Tamarind on the Exituri, but unbeknownst to them Dekobra is actually prepared to sacrifice both sects in his bid for power, considering himself a chosen one.
 
*[[Lieutenant-General]] '''Maurice Dekobra''': Exituri member, but in fact also the leader of a small, secret and apparently prosecuted sect of [[w:Skoptsy|Skopze]] that has infiltrated the Exituri ranks and aims to use them as disposable terror tools because they do not truly share their religious convictions. The Skopze aim to blame the atrocities committed on Tamarind on the Exituri, but unbeknownst to them Dekobra is actually prepared to sacrifice both sects in his bid for power, considering himself a chosen one.
 
*'''Frantisek Gellner''': ''Mech Friend''
 
*'''Frantisek Gellner''': ''Mech Friend''
*[[Captain]] '''Egon Hostovsky''': A former intelligence and special operations agent of the National Intelligence Agency who joined the military following an injury to his hand, making him feel unfit for further duty as a field operative. 1.85 m tall, forty-five years old.
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*[[Captain]] '''Egon Hostovsky''': A former intelligence and special operations agent of the National Intelligence Agency who joined the military following an injury to his hand, making him feel unfit for further duty as a field operative. 1.85m tall, 45 years old.
*'''Silva Jovanova''': Alfred Weilgunny's attractive sixteen-year-old cousin. She is the voice of reason among the ''Mech Friends'' and cautions the group against simply building a BattleMech and giving it away, pointing out that they know next to nothing about the officers and their motives and that it might be illegal to provide them with a powerful weapon system.
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*'''Silva Jovanova''': Alfred Weilgunny's attractive 16-year old cousin. She is the voice of reason among the ''Mech Friends'' and cautions the group against simply building a BattleMech and giving it away, pointing out that they know next to nothing about the officers and their motives and that it might be illegal to provide them with a powerful weapon system.
*'''Arpan Kodicek''': seventeen-year-old ''Mech Friend'' who suffered a crippling injury to his leg when he was twelve years old, smashing his dreams of becoming a MechWarrior.
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*'''Arpan Kodicek''': 17-year old ''Mech Friend'' who suffered a crippling injury to his leg when he was 12 years old, smashing his dreams of becoming a MechWarrior.
 
*Lieutenant '''Lippinsky''': A somewhat inexperienced militia officer. His first name is never mentioned.
 
*Lieutenant '''Lippinsky''': A somewhat inexperienced militia officer. His first name is never mentioned.
*[[Captain-General of the Free Worlds League|Captain-General]] '''[[Brion Marik II]]'''
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*[[Captain-General]] '''[[Brion Marik II]]'''
 
*'''Pjotr Miksch''': ''Mech Friend'' and computer expert/hacker
 
*'''Pjotr Miksch''': ''Mech Friend'' and computer expert/hacker
 
*'''Fjodor Nuhdeal''': Father-in-law to Brion Marik (II) and great-grandfather to Tomas Marik. He has withdrawn to Tamarind to live out the remainder of his life, and is too ill to travel.
 
*'''Fjodor Nuhdeal''': Father-in-law to Brion Marik (II) and great-grandfather to Tomas Marik. He has withdrawn to Tamarind to live out the remainder of his life, and is too ill to travel.
 
*Captain '''Jiri Orten''': A small (1.69m) and slightly overweight militia soldier whose career stalled (a past demotion is mentioned). He is implied to be a heavy drinker and is in fact the only officer at the party who remains sober (or alcohol resistant) enough to recognize the infiltrators, attempt to raise alarm, and escape to inform others.
 
*Captain '''Jiri Orten''': A small (1.69m) and slightly overweight militia soldier whose career stalled (a past demotion is mentioned). He is implied to be a heavy drinker and is in fact the only officer at the party who remains sober (or alcohol resistant) enough to recognize the infiltrators, attempt to raise alarm, and escape to inform others.
*'''Ota Pavel''': A former MechWarrior, he was grievously wounded in a combat drop on [[Bethonolog]] when a "TV satellite" turned out to be armed and damaged his [[Drop Cocoon]]. After crashlanding his ''[[Kintaro]]'' on a mountainside, he fought his way through enemy lines for four days before his 'Mech was destroyed. The bald, 60-year-old man now has a prosthetic hand and leg and needs a speech synthesizer to speak. He cannot pilot a 'Mech anymore and runs a junkyard/garage for a living. Associate of the ''Mech Friends''.
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*'''Ota Pavel''': A former MechWarrior, he was grievously wounded in a combat drop on [[Bethonolog]] when a "TV satellite" turned out to be armed and damaged his drop cocoon. After crashlanding his ''[[Kintaro]]'' on a mountain side, he fought his way through enemy lines for four days before his 'Mech was destroyed. The bald, sixty-year old man now has a prosthetic hand and leg and needs a speech synthesizer to speak. He cannot pilot a 'Mech anymore and runs a junkyard/garage for a living. Associate of the ''Mech Friends''.
 
*'''Karel Polacek''': Trainee merchant with Trans Universalis and a skilled organizer. ''Mech Friend'', manages the group's finances.
 
*'''Karel Polacek''': Trainee merchant with Trans Universalis and a skilled organizer. ''Mech Friend'', manages the group's finances.
 
*'''Vojtech Rakous''': ''Mech Friend''
 
*'''Vojtech Rakous''': ''Mech Friend''
*Lieutenant '''Esah Ts'gna''': Not native to Tamarind and of African descent, the 35-year-old deputy commander of the Fourth Tamarind Home Militia is a close friend of Jiri Orten, who has taken him under his wing and considers him something of an adoptive son.
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*Lieutenant '''Esah Ts'gna''': Not native to Tamarind and of african descent, the 35 year old deputy commander of the Fourth Tamarind Home Militia is a close friend of Jiri Orten, who has taken him under his wing and considers him something of an adoptive son.
 
*'''Alfred Weilgunny''': ''Mech Friend''  
 
*'''Alfred Weilgunny''': ''Mech Friend''  
 
*Inspector '''Katharina Wlaschek''': A stern and incorruptible military inspector, and one of the preciously few in her time to effectively combat the rampant corruption, incompetence and mismanagement in the Free Worlds League's military forces.
 
*Inspector '''Katharina Wlaschek''': A stern and incorruptible military inspector, and one of the preciously few in her time to effectively combat the rampant corruption, incompetence and mismanagement in the Free Worlds League's military forces.
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== Featured places ==
 
== Featured places ==
 
*[[Anegasaki]] (mentioned, as "Anegaski")
 
*[[Anegasaki]] (mentioned, as "Anegaski")
*[[Atreus (FWL)|Atreus]]
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*[[Atreus]]
 
*[[Bethonolog]] (mentioned, as "Betolonog")
 
*[[Bethonolog]] (mentioned, as "Betolonog")
 
*[[Hesperus II]] (mentioned)
 
*[[Hesperus II]] (mentioned)
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*''[[Highlander]]''
 
*''[[Highlander]]''
 
*''[[Kintaro]]''
 
*''[[Kintaro]]''
*''[[Lynx (BattleMech)|Lynx]]''
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*''[[Lynx]]''
 
*''[[Night Hawk]]''
 
*''[[Night Hawk]]''
*''[[Thorn (BattleMech)|Thorn]]''
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*''[[Thorn]]''
 
 
 
===Vehicles===
 
===Vehicles===
* [[Burke (Combat Vehicle)|Burke]]
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*''[[Burke]]''
 
 
 
===Other===
 
===Other===
 
*''Spad''-class courier boat
 
*''Spad''-class courier boat
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== Notes ==
 
== Notes ==
*The child to be kidnapped is initially wrongly described as Brion Marik (II)'s seven-year-old son Thomas. However, Brion Marik had no son named Thomas. Instead, it is later established that the child in question is Brion Marik's grandson [[Tomas Marik]], born in [[2598]] to Brion's son [[Quentin Marik]].
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*The child to be kidnapped is initially wrongly described as Brion Marik (II)'s 7-year old son Thomas. However, Brion Marik had no son named Thomas. Instead, is is later established that the child in question is Brion Marik's grandson [[Tomas Marik]], born in [[2598]] to Brion's son [[Quentin Marik]].
 
*Dekobra's flagship, the ''Vlad Tepes'', is initially introduced on p. 81 as a ''[[Lola III]]''-class destroyer, which is impossible as this class first entered service in [[2662]]. In a later chapter on p. 177, it is described as a ''[[Vincent]] Mark XXV'' corvette instead, and the vessel's length is given as "over 400 meters" (accurate for a 402 meter ''Vincent'').
 
*Dekobra's flagship, the ''Vlad Tepes'', is initially introduced on p. 81 as a ''[[Lola III]]''-class destroyer, which is impossible as this class first entered service in [[2662]]. In a later chapter on p. 177, it is described as a ''[[Vincent]] Mark XXV'' corvette instead, and the vessel's length is given as "over 400 meters" (accurate for a 402 meter ''Vincent'').
*The refurbished ''Clint'' featuring in the story is problematic for several reasons. It is explicitly described as a CLNT-1-2R, but even this earliest model was only introduced in [[2607]] according to the ''[[Master Unit List]]'', i.e. three years after the events described. The 1-2R series normally has an [[AC/10]] barrel instead of a right hand, plus a single medium laser, and is not equipped with [[jump jet]]s. However, in the novel the 'Mech uses jump jets and twin Magna medium lasers which are mounted on the right arm, as well as a fully modeled right hand. This could be taken to mean the 'Mech was customized when it was hand-built (possible given that the ''Mech Friends'' knew all along that they had no ammunition for the autocannon), though the ''Clint'' depicted on the book cover features a regular barrel arm and no hand. Further, the ''Mech Friends'' complain about having no ammunition for the missile launcher despite no known ''Clint'' model mounting a missile launcher of any kind.
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*The refurbished ''Clint'' featuring in the story is problematic for several reasons. It is explicitly described as a CLNT-1-2R, but even this earliest model was only introduced in [[2607]] according to the ''[[Master Unit List]]'', i.e. 3 years after the events described. The 1-2R series normally has an [[AC/10]] barrel instead of a right hand, plus a single medium laser, and is not equipped with [[jump jet]]s. However, in the novel the 'Mech uses jump jets and twin Magna medium lasers which are mounted on the right arm, as well as a fully modelled right hand. This could be taken to mean the 'Mech was customized when it was hand-built (possible given that the ''Mech Friends'' knew all along that they had no ammunition for the autocannon), though the ''Clint'' depicted on the book cover features a regular barrel arm and no hand. Further, the ''Mech Friends'' complain about having no ammunition for the missile launcher despite no known ''Clint'' model mounting a missile launcher of any kind.
 
*Tamarind's capital city is explained to be named Tamarind as well in this book; later sources name it Zanzibar, though it is possible that the capital was switched to another city or renamed since 2605.
 
*Tamarind's capital city is explained to be named Tamarind as well in this book; later sources name it Zanzibar, though it is possible that the capital was switched to another city or renamed since 2605.
*The DropShip ''Gustav Meyrink'' was apparently named for the austrian author [[w:Gustav Meyrink|Gustav Meyer]], who used "Gustav Meyrink" as a pen name and was a noted author of supernatural fiction. Author Hermann Schreiber had written an article about Gustav Meyrink in 2002.
 
  
 
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