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Line 56: But the battle did not go as expected. Othar, whose death or capture was clearly one of Zeta's objectives, found himself trapped. His attempt to ambush a part of Zeta barely slowed them, and though in a lucky shot he killed a Dragoon, Lieutenant [[Kirby Cole]], that only enraged more of the Dragoons, and his 'Mech was soon downed. Othar barely avoided capture, only escaping by being carried, humiliatingly, in the arms of Ricard's [[Golem]] armor, which in turn was riding on Radu's 'Mech.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', pp. 323–325</ref> But the battle did not go as expected. Othar, whose death or capture was clearly one of Zeta's objectives, found himself trapped. His attempt to ambush a part of Zeta barely slowed them, and though in a lucky shot he killed a Dragoon, Lieutenant [[Kirby Cole]], that only enraged more of the Dragoons, and his 'Mech was soon downed. Othar barely avoided capture, only escaping by being carried, humiliatingly, in the arms of Ricard's [[Golem]] armor, which in turn was riding on Radu's 'Mech.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', pp. 323–325</ref> − Othar was tired and broken, and even Zeta's retreat the next day, marking the end of the [[Battle of Gienah (3152)]], didn't make feel him better. He know they never definitively defeated the Dragoons, that everybody will know of this humiliating defeat, and of the Empire's weakness. Still worse, a year after the battle of Terra he finally received a message from Khan Ward, which stated that the ilKhan would not assist the Empire anytime soon.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', p. 329</ref> + Othar was tired and broken, and even Zeta's retreat the next day did not make feel him better. He know they never definitively defeated the Dragoons, that everybody will know of this humiliating defeat, and of the Empire's weakness. Still worse, a year after the battle of Terra he finally received a message from Khan Ward, which stated that the ilKhan would not assist the Empire anytime soon.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', p. 329</ref> ==Personality== ==Personality==
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But the battle did not go as expected. Othar, whose death or capture was clearly one of Zeta's objectives, found himself trapped. His attempt to ambush a part of Zeta barely slowed them, and though in a lucky shot he killed a Dragoon, Lieutenant [[Kirby Cole]], that only enraged more of the Dragoons, and his 'Mech was soon downed. Othar barely avoided capture, only escaping by being carried, humiliatingly, in the arms of Ricard's [[Golem]] armor, which in turn was riding on Radu's 'Mech.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', pp. 323–325</ref> | But the battle did not go as expected. Othar, whose death or capture was clearly one of Zeta's objectives, found himself trapped. His attempt to ambush a part of Zeta barely slowed them, and though in a lucky shot he killed a Dragoon, Lieutenant [[Kirby Cole]], that only enraged more of the Dragoons, and his 'Mech was soon downed. Othar barely avoided capture, only escaping by being carried, humiliatingly, in the arms of Ricard's [[Golem]] armor, which in turn was riding on Radu's 'Mech.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', pp. 323–325</ref> | ||
| − | Othar was tired and broken, and even Zeta's retreat the next day | + | Othar was tired and broken, and even Zeta's retreat the next day did not make feel him better. He know they never definitively defeated the Dragoons, that everybody will know of this humiliating defeat, and of the Empire's weakness. Still worse, a year after the battle of Terra he finally received a message from Khan Ward, which stated that the ilKhan would not assist the Empire anytime soon.<ref>''Redemption Rites'', p. 329</ref> |
==Personality== | ==Personality== | ||