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==The Theseus Knot== ==The Theseus Knot==
− Hy Frabby, I've just added articles to the wiki for the three [[WarShip]]s mentioned in the BattleCorps short story [[The Theseus Knot]], the ''[[Lakshmi]]'', ''[[Klingenthal]]'' and ''[[Minotaur (Individual Aegis-class WarShip)|Minotaur]]''. I'm working from [http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,25853.msg593719.html#msg593719 Mendrugo's review], as I'm not a BC subscriber, and his review differs from your plot summary on here slightly. Can you take a quick look at the three articles when you get a spare moment, and check I've got the details right? Ta. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 08:45, 18 January 2013 (PST) + Hy Frabby, I've just added articles to the wiki for the three [[WarShip]]s mentioned in the BattleCorps short story [[The Theseus Knot]], the ''[[Lakshmi]]'', ''[[Klingenthal]]'' and ''[[Minotaur (Vessel)|Minotaur]]''. I'm working from [http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,25853.msg593719.html#msg593719 Mendrugo's review], as I'm not a BC subscriber, and his review differs from your plot summary on here slightly. Can you take a quick look at the three articles when you get a spare moment, and check I've got the details right? Ta. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 08:45, 18 January 2013 (PST)
::Hy again. I just read through your plot summary for Theseus Knot, and you have the Lakshmi down as an Avatar class cruiser - do you have a page reference? If you do, I'll update the description of the [[Lakshmi|SLS ''Lakshmi'']] accordingly. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 11:08, 31 January 2013 (PST) ::Hy again. I just read through your plot summary for Theseus Knot, and you have the Lakshmi down as an Avatar class cruiser - do you have a page reference? If you do, I'll update the description of the [[Lakshmi|SLS ''Lakshmi'']] accordingly. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 11:08, 31 January 2013 (PST)
:::It's page 94 of the print anthology (and the third page of that particular story, with a half-page image on p. 2) so it would be on page 3 or 4 of the PDF: "he still missed the elegance of the ''Lakshmi''. Fresh from the builder's slip, he had commanded the ''Avatar''-class heavy cruiser..." [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 12:43, 31 January 2013 (PST) :::It's page 94 of the print anthology (and the third page of that particular story, with a half-page image on p. 2) so it would be on page 3 or 4 of the PDF: "he still missed the elegance of the ''Lakshmi''. Fresh from the builder's slip, he had commanded the ''Avatar''-class heavy cruiser..." [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 12:43, 31 January 2013 (PST)
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− | Hy Frabby, I've just added articles to the wiki for the three [[WarShip]]s mentioned in the BattleCorps short story [[The Theseus Knot]], the ''[[Lakshmi]]'', ''[[Klingenthal]]'' and ''[[Minotaur ( | + | Hy Frabby, I've just added articles to the wiki for the three [[WarShip]]s mentioned in the BattleCorps short story [[The Theseus Knot]], the ''[[Lakshmi]]'', ''[[Klingenthal]]'' and ''[[Minotaur (Vessel)|Minotaur]]''. I'm working from [http://bg.battletech.com/forums/index.php/topic,25853.msg593719.html#msg593719 Mendrugo's review], as I'm not a BC subscriber, and his review differs from your plot summary on here slightly. Can you take a quick look at the three articles when you get a spare moment, and check I've got the details right? Ta. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 08:45, 18 January 2013 (PST) |
::Hy again. I just read through your plot summary for Theseus Knot, and you have the Lakshmi down as an Avatar class cruiser - do you have a page reference? If you do, I'll update the description of the [[Lakshmi|SLS ''Lakshmi'']] accordingly. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 11:08, 31 January 2013 (PST) | ::Hy again. I just read through your plot summary for Theseus Knot, and you have the Lakshmi down as an Avatar class cruiser - do you have a page reference? If you do, I'll update the description of the [[Lakshmi|SLS ''Lakshmi'']] accordingly. [[User:BrokenMnemonic|BrokenMnemonic]] ([[User talk:BrokenMnemonic|talk]]) 11:08, 31 January 2013 (PST) | ||
:::It's page 94 of the print anthology (and the third page of that particular story, with a half-page image on p. 2) so it would be on page 3 or 4 of the PDF: "he still missed the elegance of the ''Lakshmi''. Fresh from the builder's slip, he had commanded the ''Avatar''-class heavy cruiser..." [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 12:43, 31 January 2013 (PST) | :::It's page 94 of the print anthology (and the third page of that particular story, with a half-page image on p. 2) so it would be on page 3 or 4 of the PDF: "he still missed the elegance of the ''Lakshmi''. Fresh from the builder's slip, he had commanded the ''Avatar''-class heavy cruiser..." [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 12:43, 31 January 2013 (PST) |