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Line 25: ==Dark Age Era== ==Dark Age Era== − In some date, she began hearing talk about a promising ''ristar'', [[Star Commander]] [[Peter Cobb]]. Seeing his potential, she began helping his career indirectly, giving opportunities for him to participate into a [[Branding Ritual]] and to fought for a [[Cobb (Bloodname)]], to which he succeeded in both. + In some date, she began hearing talk about a promising ''ristar'', [[Star Commander]] [[Peter Cobb]]. Seeing his potential, she began helping his career indirectly, giving opportuities for him to participate into a [[Branding Ritual]] and to fought for a [[Cobb (Bloodname)]], to which he succeeded in both. In [[3145]], Sachiko knew a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] special ops ''Hauptmann'', [[Laila Renwick]], which had crippled her bondholder, and saved her life in exchange for a future favor.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 3</ref> In [[3145]], Sachiko knew a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] special ops ''Hauptmann'', [[Laila Renwick]], which had crippled her bondholder, and saved her life in exchange for a future favor.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 3</ref> − About [[3148]], she requested Peter for the First Horde, putting him in command of Kol Trinary , and making him her military aide, teaching him to led someday the Clan. + About [[3148]], she requested Peter for the First Horde, puting him in command of Kol Trinary , and making him her military aide, teaching him to led someday the Clan. Cobb was a student of history which wrote essays condemning the [[Mongol Doctrine]] and the forced alliance to which the Horses were part, the [[Golden Ordun]]. Sachiko distributed them around the Clan, which gave Peter a great reputation. Cobb was a student of history which wrote essays condemning the [[Mongol Doctrine]] and the forced alliance to which the Horses were part, the [[Golden Ordun]]. Sachiko distributed them around the Clan, which gave Peter a great reputation. By then, the clan was almost ripping himself appart because of fights through all castes, as the Horses were divided between followers of the Khan [[Gottfried Amirault]] and SaKhan [[Fulk Lassenerra]]. The essays made Cobb a target of [[Trial of Grievance]] from followers of one or other, but in vain, as he always defeated them. The 10 May 3150, after defeating another opponent, she had a meeting with Cobb, sending him to became the bondholder of Laila, to made her train a Horses' recon unit.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 1-3</ref> By then, the clan was almost ripping himself appart because of fights through all castes, as the Horses were divided between followers of the Khan [[Gottfried Amirault]] and SaKhan [[Fulk Lassenerra]]. The essays made Cobb a target of [[Trial of Grievance]] from followers of one or other, but in vain, as he always defeated them. The 10 May 3150, after defeating another opponent, she had a meeting with Cobb, sending him to became the bondholder of Laila, to made her train a Horses' recon unit.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 1-3</ref> Line 36:
Line 35: ==IlClan Era== ==IlClan Era== − Once on Terran's system, Scahiko was appalled when saw the [[McKenna's Pride]], which she had seen on [[Strana Mechty]] when was young. Once in Terra, when Gottfried argued with now [[IlKhan]] [[Alaric Ward]], Sachiko attempted to made him contain himself, but he refused to listen her. in a later meeting, she scolded both Khans for their words or lack of actions, and as the Khan refused to recognize Alaric as IlKhan, she began making plants to escape if the Wolves turned against them.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 21-22</ref> + Once on Terran's system, Scahiko was appaled when saw the [[McKenna's Pride]], which she had seen on [[Strana Mechty]] when was young. Once in Terra, when Gottfried argued with now [[IlKhan]] [[Alaric Ward]], Sachiko attempted to made him contain himself, but he refused to listen her. in a later meeting, she scolded both Khans for their words or lack of actions, and as the Khan refused to recognize Alaric as IlKhan, she began making plants to escape if the Wolves turned against them.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 21-22</ref> − During the [[Battle of Sudeten (3152)]], Sachiko advised caution, but to no avail. After the campaign ended in defeat, Sachiko, which secret special ops unit had captured several Falcon's holoprojectors, testified they were genuine. After Gottfried had been killed by Fulk and he became SaKhan, Sachiko was chosen by the new SaKhan, [[Patricia DeLaurel]], to command Fire Horse Galaxy. She nominated Peter as her successor in command of the First Horde Cluster.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 36-39</ref> + During the [[Battle of Sudeten (3152)]], Sachiko advised caution, but both Khans ignored her. After the campaign ended in defeat, Sachiko, which secret special ops unit had captured several Falcon's holoprojectors, testified they were genuine. After Gottfried had been killed by Fulk and he became SaKhan, Sachiko was choosed by the new SaKhan, [[Patricia DeLaurel]], to command Fire Horse Galaxy. She nominated Peter as her successor in command of the First Horde Cluster.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 36-39</ref> ==Physical Description== ==Physical Description==
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| − | In some date, she began hearing talk about a promising ''ristar'', [[Star Commander]] [[Peter Cobb]]. Seeing his potential, she began helping his career indirectly, giving | + | In some date, she began hearing talk about a promising ''ristar'', [[Star Commander]] [[Peter Cobb]]. Seeing his potential, she began helping his career indirectly, giving opportuities for him to participate into a [[Branding Ritual]] and to fought for a [[Cobb (Bloodname)]], to which he succeeded in both. |
In [[3145]], Sachiko knew a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] special ops ''Hauptmann'', [[Laila Renwick]], which had crippled her bondholder, and saved her life in exchange for a future favor.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 3</ref> | In [[3145]], Sachiko knew a [[Lyran Commonwealth]] special ops ''Hauptmann'', [[Laila Renwick]], which had crippled her bondholder, and saved her life in exchange for a future favor.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 3</ref> | ||
| − | About [[3148]], she requested Peter for the First Horde, | + | About [[3148]], she requested Peter for the First Horde, puting him in command of Kol Trinary , and making him her military aide, teaching him to led someday the Clan. |
Cobb was a student of history which wrote essays condemning the [[Mongol Doctrine]] and the forced alliance to which the Horses were part, the [[Golden Ordun]]. Sachiko distributed them around the Clan, which gave Peter a great reputation. | Cobb was a student of history which wrote essays condemning the [[Mongol Doctrine]] and the forced alliance to which the Horses were part, the [[Golden Ordun]]. Sachiko distributed them around the Clan, which gave Peter a great reputation. | ||
By then, the clan was almost ripping himself appart because of fights through all castes, as the Horses were divided between followers of the Khan [[Gottfried Amirault]] and SaKhan [[Fulk Lassenerra]]. The essays made Cobb a target of [[Trial of Grievance]] from followers of one or other, but in vain, as he always defeated them. The 10 May 3150, after defeating another opponent, she had a meeting with Cobb, sending him to became the bondholder of Laila, to made her train a Horses' recon unit.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 1-3</ref> | By then, the clan was almost ripping himself appart because of fights through all castes, as the Horses were divided between followers of the Khan [[Gottfried Amirault]] and SaKhan [[Fulk Lassenerra]]. The essays made Cobb a target of [[Trial of Grievance]] from followers of one or other, but in vain, as he always defeated them. The 10 May 3150, after defeating another opponent, she had a meeting with Cobb, sending him to became the bondholder of Laila, to made her train a Horses' recon unit.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 1-3</ref> | ||
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| − | Once on Terran's system, Scahiko was | + | Once on Terran's system, Scahiko was appaled when saw the [[McKenna's Pride]], which she had seen on [[Strana Mechty]] when was young. Once in Terra, when Gottfried argued with now [[IlKhan]] [[Alaric Ward]], Sachiko attempted to made him contain himself, but he refused to listen her. in a later meeting, she scolded both Khans for their words or lack of actions, and as the Khan refused to recognize Alaric as IlKhan, she began making plants to escape if the Wolves turned against them.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 21-22</ref> |
| − | During the [[Battle of Sudeten (3152)]], Sachiko advised caution, but | + | During the [[Battle of Sudeten (3152)]], Sachiko advised caution, but both Khans ignored her. After the campaign ended in defeat, Sachiko, which secret special ops unit had captured several Falcon's holoprojectors, testified they were genuine. After Gottfried had been killed by Fulk and he became SaKhan, Sachiko was choosed by the new SaKhan, [[Patricia DeLaurel]], to command Fire Horse Galaxy. She nominated Peter as her successor in command of the First Horde Cluster.<ref>''Elements of Treason: Honor'' ch. 36-39</ref> |
==Physical Description== | ==Physical Description== | ||