User contributions
- 07:45, 18 April 2013 diff hist +4 Theodore Cameron (26th c.) added a 'the'
- 07:32, 18 April 2013 diff hist -13 Theodore Cameron (26th c.) edited again to change tenses because i'm an idiot. should be all fixed now.
- 07:28, 18 April 2013 diff hist +43 Theodore Cameron (26th c.) further editing, corrected some of my own spelling mistake and rephrased some sentences i didn't like.
- 07:19, 18 April 2013 diff hist +390 Theodore Cameron (26th c.) edited to make the english better. i do not wish to offend the fellow who wrote it, and did my best to only change the words to be more readable for natural english speakers, and not the meaning.