Editing Talk:Dierdre Lear
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Line 1: − {{Project Banner|Account.svg|Project Characters|Characters|new}} + {{WikiProject Biographies|tr=new}} ==Name Correction Needed== ==Name Correction Needed== − Dr. Lear's first name is <b>Deirdre</b>, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected![[User:Nuclear-Fridge|Nuclear-Fridge]] ([[User talk:Nuclear-Fridge|talk]]) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST) + *Dr. Lear's first name is <b>Deirdre</b>, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected![[User:Nuclear-Fridge|Nuclear-Fridge]] ([[User talk:Nuclear-Fridge|talk]]) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST) − :I moved the article and corrected all wrong spellings on Sarna that I could find. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 08:16, 13 December 2017 (EST) − ==General Cleanup== − :In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT) − :Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT) − :Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:03, 9 April 2024 (EDT) − :Marked the final line of the article as "Citation Needed," which is accurate. Further, all details following her marriage to Kai Allard-Liao need to be fleshed out.[[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT) − ==Removed Incomprehensible Tag== − :Removed the tag as I think the article should meet most editorial standards now, despite lack of detail that should come from ''Assumption of Risk''.[[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT)
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