Talk:Burke Kale
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Revision as of 07:11, 18 July 2021 by Deric strider (talk | contribs)
some text needs to be made clear ie "His groundbreaking research i advanced neurohelmet earned him a post as Senior Project Developer for the NAIS[2] and a place in history.[1]" Is the i meaning it was the MK I of advance neurohelmets? or is the i a typo?
suggested minor edits: He did pick NAIS graduates of the class of 3048 for his VRPP project > He picked NAIS graduates from the class of 3048 for his VRPP project (seems less clunky to me)