Difference between revisions of "Talk:Albatross"

 
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;Excerpt one:. . . The 'Mech carries an Irian Weapons Works V7 <u>LRM 15</u> launcher <u>which gives it long range</u>… <u>capabilities</u>.
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Nothing wrong there, accurate to my knowledge.
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;Excerpt two:This is backed up by [a]… <u>LB-X Autocannon/10</u> and a[n]… <u>ER Large Laser which give the 'Mech</u>… <u>long-range</u> punch.
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Forgive me if I'm wrong, but isn't a LB-X AC/10 a medium range(ish) weapon? How does it work with the LRM and the ER LL to give the 'Mech a 'long-range punch'?
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;Excerpt three:The 'Mech carries a… <u>Large Pulse Laser</u> which allows the 'Mech to engage… at the edge of the medium to long-range envelope.
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Isn't 'around here' where the LB-X AC/10 should be mentioned?
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--[[User:Xoid|Xoid]] 06:58, 17 November 2006 (CST)

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Rewording

Excerpt one
. . . The 'Mech carries an Irian Weapons Works V7 LRM 15 launcher which gives it long rangecapabilities.

Nothing wrong there, accurate to my knowledge.

Excerpt two
This is backed up by [a]… LB-X Autocannon/10 and a[n]… ER Large Laser which give the 'Mechlong-range punch.

Forgive me if I'm wrong, but isn't a LB-X AC/10 a medium range(ish) weapon? How does it work with the LRM and the ER LL to give the 'Mech a 'long-range punch'?

Excerpt three
The 'Mech carries a… Large Pulse Laser which allows the 'Mech to engage… at the edge of the medium to long-range envelope.

Isn't 'around here' where the LB-X AC/10 should be mentioned?

--Xoid 06:58, 17 November 2006 (CST)