Talk:Magi

Cleanup

The sections need a general review for articles (the, an, a, etc.), as it cannot be read without a bit of 'translation' by the reader. There may also still be wikilinks to be added.--Revanche ^{(talk|contribs)} 13:35, 16 January 2010 (UTC)

I put a first pass on cleaning up the grammar here. ThePov 02:53, 17 February 2010 (UTC)

I made another stab at smoothing out the grammar a few days back. --Museling 22:06, 14 March 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, both. Whenever you guys feel it passes, please feel free to remove the tag. --Revanche ^{(talk|contribs)} 23:20, 14 March 2010 (UTC)