Talk:Halloran Hallis

Multiple issues[edit]

While this is a decent start at an article, there are several recommendations I can make to improve this article. I initially put a multiple issues tag on the article, but it keeps on getting removed.

  • Recommendation issue 1: This is a character article, so it might be a good idea to use the template for character articles found here: https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Help:CreateCharacterArticle. (I was originally going to use a cleanup tag for issue 1.
  • Recommendation issue 2: Please include the canon sources for this article's statements. This article needs canon references as per https://www.sarna.net/wiki/Help:References. (I was originally going to use a refimprove tag for issue 2)

Thanks! 75.23.228.139 12:44, 24 August 2022 (EDT)

I see Sorry I am new to this and just wanted to get the information out there, There isn't much information on the pilot for the character reference to be filled out, just statements made in the article of wounds and talk of the group he is with everything come out of the short story Redemption and Malice, any changes you might think is needed ill leave alone thought it was a error i was getting sorry.
No worries. Thanks for taking the initiative to fill a gap in this wiki. 75.23.228.139 18:08, 24 August 2022 (EDT)