Cleaned up some of the grammar from original author not having full understanding of English sounds to spelling. Fixed typos and omitted Misery from the Battle of Udibi vs Wolf's Dragoons since the wording was "this then also before than this" added the campaign month. Looks like the time line needs an edit as well. The year is correct but the timeline omits the battle and instead mentions a "war game" annual training event. Tried to break up some of the "these guys were here then sent to here so that then they could also while doing" run on sentences to something more understandable also noted that the turning in of last SLDF equipment was for lesser Davion equipment so that not having that understanding it's suggested the SLDF was better, while changing "materials" to equipment. Unless they were putting on a fashion show?
- Thanks for the cleanup; you will find many an article that are written as such because although some users are great at adding info, it isn't always the most grammatically correct. This sort of work is always appreciated here, and your thoroughness is great. Keep up the good work. -BobTheZombie (talk) 14:17, 27 January 2014 (PST)