Talk:Task Force Serpent

First, this page desperately needs some grammatical clean up. I ran out of steam halfway through a preliminary overhaul. Second, I had a question about the claimed route taken by TFS (probably a result of the grammar):

"Task Force Serpent went along a route that brought them near the Outworld Alliance. They went on with a route, parallel to those commonly used by the clans."

Did TFS start way out by the OA? If so, how/when did TFS end up on the path parallel to the common Clan route to the Inner Sphere? That's way over toward the Lyran/Kuritan/FRR space from the OA.

Finally, is this entry really still a stub? --Cray 04:20, 11 February 2009 (PST)

"Serpent's route would take them through the Federated Commonwealth and the Outworlds Alliance...." From Twilight of the Clans, pg. 9. --Scaletail 17:41, 11 February 2009 (PST)

Sorry about the grammar, but english is not my mother tongue. I know, some of my sentences sound clumsy. --Detlef 03:13, 12 February 2009 (PST)

No need to apologize. You provided a great deal of good information and really filled out the page. --Cray 04:02, 12 February 2009 (PST)

Move History to New Article?

Here's something I thought about. This article is about Task Force Serpent - the actual Star League Unit put together to attack Huntress.

Most of the History in this article, while execellent, is actually about Operation Serpent, the campaign to attack Huntress. I suggest we create a new article about Operation Serpent itself and move the campaign narrative there. Alkemita 10:09, 16 March 2009 (PDT)

That will be difficult, as TFS changed during the execution of OS. They gained a warship, they lost troops... --Detlef 10:23, 16 March 2009 (PDT)

Every unit changes composition over time. That said, the two are the same thing. Why would they need different articles? --Scaletail 17:00, 16 March 2009 (PDT)