Sarna News: Bad 'Mechs - Icestorm

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==Lead Developer: Articles Links==
 
==Lead Developer: Articles Links==

Revision as of 08:15, 23 May 2021

Assignment Progress:

Lead Developer: Articles Links

Assigned: Revanche

Comments:

  • 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
  • Note the personal name for the Griffin.
  • Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.

Research Writer: Articles Completed

Assigned: Revanche

Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed

Assigned: none at present

Copy Editor: Articles Edited

Assigned: none at present

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