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Annihilator

There has been a question about the -1G variant of the Annihilator. I don't have RS:Klondike, so would you mind checking on it? --Scaletail 05:31, 23 December 2011 (PST)

Doneve's answered the question.--Mbear^(talk) 03:57, 19 January 2012 (PST)

Record Sheets 3050 Upgrades Unabridged

Hy Mbear, i see you removed the moratorium template, i want to stard adding BV (2.0) to all variants, i don't want to delete BV's there don't match the RS:3050Uu Clans & Star League entry, but i delete the RS:3050U references, i cant found on the old Record Sheets any BV, i give you an example on the Dasher page, i stard to do this yet, please give me a response when you found time, thanks.--Doneve 12:38, 18 January 2012 (PST)

I don't see anything wrong with what you've done.--Mbear^(talk) 03:56, 19 January 2012 (PST)

Take a look

Hy again, please can you take a look on this interesting talk BattleTechWiki talk:Project Military Commands#force structure of the different factions, what you are think about this.--Doneve 13:28, 19 January 2012 (PST)

Rank Insignia

Hello Mbear, I upload the insignia because they are different from yours. It was mentioned in the Field Manual: Federated Suns p. 26 that the ranks insignia changed after the seperation from the Lyran Alliance. Furthermore a few ranks were reestablished or new created. My goal is to put at every military organization page a link to a site were the the rank structure is explained with the different between naval and army. Neuling 09:28, 1 February 2012 (PST)

I think I understand, but just to be sure I do I want to rephrase what you said this way:

My goal is to create a page similar to Armed Forces of the Federated Suns Military Ranks that will contain information regarding the roles and responsibilities of the army and naval ranks are clearly defined. For example the duties of an AFFS Leftenant Colonel/Light Commodore in 3025 are different from those of an AFFS Leftenant Colonel/Light Commodore in 3067. This page will show the difference in responsibilities.

At the same time, I also want to show how the FedCom Alliance affected the rank structures of the AFFS and the LCAF, as you don't provide any information about that.

Am I reading you correctly? If so, this is a good idea and one I wish I had thought of.--Mbear^(talk)

You understand my intention about the project correctly. It will take some time to compare the different system and to find a way how I can explain the differents understandable.Neuling 05:39, 2 February 2012 (PST)

DCMS Deploment

Hello Mbear, please take a look at User:Neuling/DCMS Deployment and give me your response. The article is abut the deployment of DCMS forces. The next step are the expansion of

3050 - 20 Year Update

3054 - Objective Raids

3059 - Field Manual Draconis Combine

3062 - Shattered Sphere

3067 - Field Manual Updates

3079 - Field Report DCMS

when possible with maps in a gallery for comparision. tnx Neuling 13:31, 6 February 2012 (PST)

I would to say a lot of the content on the page merged with the DCMS Military District pages during the various eras, example Dieron Military District.--Doneve 14:16, 6 February 2012 (PST)

I agree with Doneve that a lot of this would look good on the relevant Military District page. I also like your idea of including a map of the relevant prefecture/district. You might put that in another column in your table.--Mbear^(talk) 06:24, 7 February 2012 (PST)

I made some minor spelling and grammar changes to the page. Deletions are shown in strikethrough. Not bad really, just some basic errors that crept in and detract from the article.--Mbear^(talk) 06:30, 7 February 2012 (PST)

Spelling

Hello Mbear, I use a spell checker to improve the quality of my work. Please tell me if he works reliable. AFFS training & education Tnx Neuling 12:30, 8 February 2012 (PST)

The spell checker did a good job of finding all the misspelled words. It didn't find instances of the wrong word being used or some oddities with past vs. present tense, but that's understandable. For example under Military Academies Enrollment header:

The aspirant must pass a fare harder test then the usual enlisted.

Should be

The aspirant must pass a far harder test then the usual enlisted.

But overall using the spell checker has eliminated a lot of the small spelling errors that were previously in your work. Good job.--Mbear^(talk) 06:05, 9 February 2012 (PST)