User talk:Sasquatch


Good, solid edits today on Sha Clarke. For that, I'd like to award you the Substantial Addition Award.

Substantial Addition Award

I also see you've been here since September of last year, so I thought to add your Time In Service ribbon, with 3rd month mark. Remember to change it to the 6th month mark come March 10th. Again, thanks. --Revanche (talk|contribs) 03:26, 24 February 2011 (UTC)


Morning, Sasquatch: you PM'd to ask me to review Marcus Baxter and Cassie Suthorn. I was able to do a fly-by just now. My perspective of Baxter is that it received a very strong addition to the article with missing facts attached and a strong narrative pumping up the original information. As for Suthorn, a lot of very necessary editing was accomplished (missing words added, grammar corrected, etc.). The one area of correction that jumped out at me was the change in tenses. Unless we're writing about a real-world product (novel, game), we use the past tense, as in we're reporting on what has happened. It appears you changed the tense with this article to have it read as occurring as the reader reads the article. Does that make sense? Hope that review helps! Thanks for the work.--Revanche (talk|contribs) 14:52, 8 March 2011 (UTC)