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Revision as of 18:20, 22 May 2021
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Fact Checker: Articles Links
Assigned: Revanche
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- 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
- Note the personal name for the Griffin.
- Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.
Research Writer: Articles Completed
- Hamilton City
- Brunswick]]
Assigned: Revanche
Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed
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Copy Editor: Articles Edited
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