Difference between revisions of "BattleTechWiki:Project Unfinished Book/JTP:New Avalon/The Show Must Go On"
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| − | + | * [[Hamilton City]] | |
| − | + | * [[Brunswick]] | |
| − | + | * [[New Avalon]] | |
| − | + | * [[Federated Suns]] | |
| − | + | * [[3074]] | |
| − | + | * [[Avitue]] | |
| − | + | * [[Natasha Ergen]] | |
| − | + | * [[Word of Blake]] | |
| − | + | * [[Grigori]] | |
| − | + | * [[StarSlab]] | |
| − | + | * [[Griffin]] | |
| − | + | * [[Broadway]] | |
| − | + | * [[Corean Enterprises]] | |
| + | * [[Sparky]] | ||
| + | </div> | ||
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Revision as of 17:08, 22 May 2021
Contents
Fact Checker: Articles Links
Comments:
- 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
- Note the personal name for the Griffin.
- Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.
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