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:In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | :In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | ||
:Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | :Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | ||
| − | :Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice | + | :Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:03, 9 April 2024 (EDT) |
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Name Correction Needed
Dr. Lear's first name is Deirdre, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected!Nuclear-Fridge (talk) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST)
- I moved the article and corrected all wrong spellings on Sarna that I could find. Frabby (talk) 08:16, 13 December 2017 (EST)
- In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. Ross (talk) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT)
- Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive Ross (talk) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT)
- Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice Ross (talk) 16:03, 9 April 2024 (EDT)