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Dr. Lear's first name is <b>Deirdre</b>, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected![[User:Nuclear-Fridge|Nuclear-Fridge]] ([[User talk:Nuclear-Fridge|talk]]) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST) | Dr. Lear's first name is <b>Deirdre</b>, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected![[User:Nuclear-Fridge|Nuclear-Fridge]] ([[User talk:Nuclear-Fridge|talk]]) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST) | ||
:I moved the article and corrected all wrong spellings on Sarna that I could find. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 08:16, 13 December 2017 (EST) | :I moved the article and corrected all wrong spellings on Sarna that I could find. [[User:Frabby|Frabby]] ([[User talk:Frabby|talk]]) 08:16, 13 December 2017 (EST) | ||
+ | ==General Cleanup== | ||
:In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | :In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | ||
:Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | :Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | ||
− | :Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice | + | :Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice [[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:03, 9 April 2024 (EDT) |
+ | :Marked the final line of the article as "Citation Needed," which is accurate. Further, all details following her marriage to Kai Allard-Liao need to be fleshed out.[[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT) | ||
+ | ==Removed Incomprehensible Tag== | ||
+ | :Removed the tag as I think the article should meet most editorial standards now, despite lack of detail that should come from ''Assumption of Risk''.[[User:Ross|Ross]] ([[User talk:Ross|talk]]) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT) |
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Name Correction Needed[edit]
Dr. Lear's first name is Deirdre, not "Diedre". This needs to be corrected!Nuclear-Fridge (talk) 04:01, 11 February 2015 (PST)
- I moved the article and corrected all wrong spellings on Sarna that I could find. Frabby (talk) 08:16, 13 December 2017 (EST)
General Cleanup[edit]
- In the opening line of the article, I included a reference to Kai-Allard Liao as Deirdre's husband and her own service in the AFFC during the Clan Invasion to add clarity to her importance as a character. Ross (talk) 15:41, 9 April 2024 (EDT)
- Did some general grammatical cleanup, e.g. adding apostrophes where necessary to show a possessive Ross (talk) 15:55, 9 April 2024 (EDT)
- Rewrote numerous sentences to make them easier to read, and to accord with a more formal style, e.g., removing passive voice Ross (talk) 16:03, 9 April 2024 (EDT)
- Marked the final line of the article as "Citation Needed," which is accurate. Further, all details following her marriage to Kai Allard-Liao need to be fleshed out.Ross (talk) 16:39, 9 April 2024 (EDT)