Difference between revisions of "Talk:Olympus"
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Revision as of 10:53, 24 February 2010
Create Olympus (Recharge Station) as stub. Feel free to complete the arcticle.Doneve 20:56, 22 February 2010 (UTC)
- Added the descriptions and stuff, anybody care to check? --RagTag 14:04, 23 February 2010 (UTC)
- A couple of minor edits, but your grammer and word choices are very good. I found this phrase to be rather humorous: "largely shortening", which I changed to "significantly shortening". Large is associated with size or volume, while short is associated with length of measurement (size or time). My only caution is on a very common trip-up (that I commit all the time): beware mixing present tense and past tense, they can even be tricky in the same tense. --Trebor 14:33, 24 February 2010 (UTC)
- That old problem of mine...Thanks! RagTag 14:37, 24 February 2010 (UTC)
- You are welcome, I'm happy to help. :) --Trebor 14:53, 24 February 2010 (UTC)