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Revision as of 10:20, 23 May 2021
Contents
Assignment Progress: 25%
Lead Developer: Articles Links
Assigned: Revanche
Comments: Completed
- 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
- Note the personal name for the Griffin.
- Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.
Research Writer: Articles Completed
Assigned: Revanche
Comments:
- I did not feel Federated Suns would benefit from any mention of this skirmish.
- Avitue was referenced in the short story, but the vague description of her (personal?) defeat did not some appropriate for the relevant chronological section of her history.
Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed
Assigned: none at present
Copy Editor: Articles Edited
Assigned: none at present
Comments:
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- Full cite: <ref name=JTPL01>''Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon'', p. 1, "The Show Must Go On"</ref>
- Recall cite: <ref name=JTPL01/>
- Bibliography: ''[[Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon]]''
- Talk page: {{WikiProject UnfinishedBook|tr=new}}