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'''Assignment Progress:''' 25%
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==Lead Developer: Articles Links==
 
==Lead Developer: Articles Links==
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* [[StarSlab]]
 
* [[StarSlab]]
 
* [[New Avalon]]
 
* [[New Avalon]]
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* [[Natasha Ergen]]
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* [[3074]]
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* [[Corean Enterprises]]
 
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Assigned: [[User:Revanche|Revanche]]
 
Assigned: [[User:Revanche|Revanche]]
  
Comments:
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Comments: '''Completed'''
* I did not feel [[Federated Suns]] would benefit from any mention of this skirmish.
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* The following articles I felt did not benefit from any mention of this skirmish: [[Avitue]], [[Federated Suns]], [[Grigori]], [[Word of Blake]]
* [[Avitue]] was referenced in the short story, but the vague description of her (personal?) defeat did not some appropriate for the relevant chronological section of her history.
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* Awaiting [[Policy_Talk:Notability#Alternative_to_Notable_.27Mechwarrior_.28etc..29_Sections|feedback]] on whether Ergen is a notable ''[[Griffin]]'' pilot.
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* Despite Sarna's [[Policy:Notability|notability policy]] indicating everything named has relevance, creating an article for [[Broadway]], a "six-lane road"  in which the protagonist half-way crossed in a one-page story, seems excessive. I'm fine with red-linking it in this assignment's other articles{{m}}in the possibility it might have or will have notoriety.
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* [[Sparky]] re-directs to [[Griffin]], an appropriate connection for a named 'Mech.
  
 
==Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed==
 
==Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed==
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* Recall cite: '''<nowiki><ref name=JTPL01/></nowiki>'''
 
* Recall cite: '''<nowiki><ref name=JTPL01/></nowiki>'''
 
* Bibliography: '''<nowiki>''[[Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon]]''</nowiki>'''
 
* Bibliography: '''<nowiki>''[[Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon]]''</nowiki>'''
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* Talk page: '''<nowiki>{{WikiProject UnfinishedBook|tr=new}}</nowiki>'''
  
 
[[Category:UBP Mission JTP New Avalon]]
 
[[Category:UBP Mission JTP New Avalon]]

Latest revision as of 12:57, 23 May 2021

Assignment Progress: 50%

Lead Developer: Articles Links[edit]

Assigned: Revanche

Comments: Completed

  • 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
  • Note the personal name for the Griffin.
  • Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.

Research Writer: Articles Completed[edit]

Assigned: Revanche

Comments: Completed

  • The following articles I felt did not benefit from any mention of this skirmish: Avitue, Federated Suns, Grigori, Word of Blake
  • Awaiting feedback on whether Ergen is a notable Griffin pilot.
  • Despite Sarna's notability policy indicating everything named has relevance, creating an article for Broadway, a "six-lane road" in which the protagonist half-way crossed in a one-page story, seems excessive. I'm fine with red-linking it in this assignment's other articles—in the possibility it might have or will have notoriety.
  • Sparky re-directs to Griffin, an appropriate connection for a named 'Mech.

Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed[edit]

Assigned: none at present

Copy Editor: Articles Edited[edit]

Assigned: none at present

Comments:

Tools[edit]

  • Full cite: <ref name=JTPL01>''Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon'', p. 1, "The Show Must Go On"</ref>
  • Recall cite: <ref name=JTPL01/>
  • Bibliography: ''[[Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon]]''
  • Talk page: {{WikiProject UnfinishedBook|tr=new}}