BattleTechWiki:Project Unfinished Book/JTP:New Avalon/The Show Must Go On
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- 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
- Note the personal name for the Griffin.
- Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.
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