BattleTechWiki:Project Unfinished Book/JTP:New Avalon/The Show Must Go On

Assignment Progress: 25%

Lead Developer: Articles Links

Assigned: Revanche

Comments: Completed

  • 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
  • Note the personal name for the Griffin.
  • Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.

Research Writer: Articles Completed

Assigned: Revanche

Comments:

  • I did not feel Federated Suns would benefit from any mention of this skirmish.
  • Avitue was referenced in the short story, but the vague description of her (personal?) defeat did not some appropriate for the relevant chronological section of her history.

Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed

Assigned: none at present

Copy Editor: Articles Edited

Assigned: none at present

Comments:

Tools

  • Full cite: <ref name=JTPL01>''Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon'', p. 1, "The Show Must Go On"</ref>
  • Recall cite: <ref name=JTPL01/>

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