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Assignment Progress: 25%
Lead Developer: Articles Links
Assigned: Revanche
Comments: Completed
- 'StarSlab' is mentioned. Is it a company? A brand? How should its reference in this short story be used?
- Note the personal name for the Griffin.
- Note the mention of Corean (Corean Enterprises?) technicians. Is it a reference to that company building Griffins? Heat sinks? My suggestion is to make mention of their rebuilding services.
Research Writer: Articles Completed
Assigned: Revanche
Comments: Completed
- The following articles I felt did not benefit from any mention of this skirmish: Avitue, Federated Suns, Grigori, Word of Blake
- Awaiting feedback on whether Ergen is a notable Griffin pilot.
- Despite Sarna's notability policy indicating everything named has relevance, creating an article for Broadway, a "six-lane road" in which the protagonist half-way crossed in a one-page story, seems excessive. I'm fine with red-linking it in this assignment's other articles—in the possibility it might have or will have notoriety.
- Sparky re-directs to Griffin, an appropriate connection for a named 'Mech.
Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed
Assigned: none at present
Copy Editor: Articles Edited
Assigned: none at present
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- Full cite: <ref name=JTPL01>''Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon'', p. 1, "The Show Must Go On"</ref>
- Recall cite: <ref name=JTPL01/>
- Bibliography: ''[[Jihad Turning Points: New Avalon]]''
- Talk page: {{WikiProject UnfinishedBook|tr=new}}