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==Plot summary==
 
==Plot summary==
The 7 July 3064, on planet Kikuyu, the mercenary group [[Storm's Metal Thunder]] was under a [[Clan Jade Falcon]] forces overwhelming attack. Sergeant Andrew Rivenberg attempts to assist his commander, Colonel Griff Storm, but he arrived nearby only at time to see him die.  
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On 7 July 3064, on planet Kikuyu, the mercenary group [[Storm's Metal Thunder]] were facing an overwhelming attack by [[Clan Jade Falcon]] forces. Sergeant Andrew Rivenberg attempts to assist his commander, Colonel Griff Storm, but arrives nearby just in time to see him die.
Without alternatives, Andrew began retreating towards the unit's drop zone. On the way there, he was called on by his brother and superior, lieutenant Timothy Rivenberg. He informs him about his situation, and Falcon's fighters were overrunning the drop zone. Timothy has the only remaining 'Mech still active, and orders his brother to return before is too late. Andrew complies and accelerates his advance through the Storm's devastated base.  
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Without alternatives, Andrew begins retreating towards the unit's drop zone. On the way there, he's hailed by his brother and superior, Lieutenant Timothy Rivenberg. Andrew informs him of his situation, and Falcon fighters are overrunning the drop zone. Timothy has the only remaining 'Mech, and orders his brother to return before it's too late. Andrew complies and accelerates his advance toward the Thunder's devastated base.
He manages to see the drop zone from far, and sees the unit's noncombatants and dependants was still on the way to the two remaining [[DropShip]]s.
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He manages to see the drop zone from far, and sees the unit's noncombatants and dependents still on their way to the two remaining [[DropShip]]s.
Andrew founds himself under a overwhelming attack of a Falcon's ''Mad Cat''. Both exchange fire, but Andrew's ''Salamander'' fells to the ground. The Falcon pilot approaches, apparently to kill him, when a Demolisher tank attacks him in the rear. He replies while the tank attempts to retreat, and that gaves andrew the opportunity to rise his 'Mech. He manages to crush the falcon's cockpitt, killing its pilot, but the Demolisher had already been destroyed.  
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Andrew finds himself under overwhelming attack by a Falcon ''Mad Cat''. They exchange fire, but Andrew's ''Salamander'' falls to the ground. The ''Mad Cat'' approaches, apparently to kill him, when a Demolisher tank attacks it from the rear. He returns fire while the tank attempts to retreat, and this gives Andrew the opportunity to stand his 'Mech up. He manages to crush the Falcon's cockpit, killing the pilot, but the Demolisher has already been destroyed.
Andrew resumes his way to the drop zoned, finding his brother's 'Mech being the last defender of it. With falcon's forces approaching from behind, Andrew obeys, but barely he was inside the DropShip when he fell, losing conciousness.  
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Andrew resumes his path to the drop zone, finding his brother's 'Mech the last defender. With Falcon forces approaching from behind, Andrew obey Timothy's order to board, barely making it inside the DropShip before losing conciousness and falling.
Andrew awakens at the DropShip's sickbay, being watched by his brother. He informs him about what happened: a Falcon's Gauss slug had touched his 'Mech's leg, making him fell. That makes Andrew to remember what happened to the colonel, and attempts to explain his failure to his brother, but Timothy cuts him off, before saying that Storm was the responsible of the debacle for its innadequate tactics. He informs his brother about his plan to go to Melissia, expecting the forces gathering there can stop the Jade Falcons, before leaving his brother alone.
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Andrew awakens in the DropShip's sick bay, being watched by his brother. Timothy informs him about what happened: a Falcon's Gauss slug struck his 'Mech's leg, making him fall. That causes Andrew to remember what happened to the colonel, and he attempts to explain his failure to his brother, but Timothy cuts him off, saying that Storm was responsible for the debacle with his innadequate tactics. Timothy informs Andrew about his plan to go to Melissia, expecting the forces gathering there to stop the Jade Falcons, before leaving his brother alone.
  
 
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==Featured BattleTech==
 
==Featured BattleTech==
* [[Battle Cobra]]
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* ''[[Battle Cobra]]''
 
* [[Demolisher]] tank
 
* [[Demolisher]] tank
* [[Devastator]]
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* ''[[Devastator]]''
* [[Salamander]]
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* ''[[Salamander]]''
* [[Stalker]]
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* ''[[Stalker]]''
* [[Timber Wolf (Mad Cat)]]
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* ''[[Timber Wolf (Mad Cat)]]''
  
 
==Featured planets==
 
==Featured planets==
 
* [[Kikuyu]]
 
* [[Kikuyu]]
 
* [[Melissia]] (mentioned)
 
* [[Melissia]] (mentioned)
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[[Category:Short Stories]]
 
[[Category:Short Stories]]
 
[[Category:Works by Julian Michael Carver]]
 
[[Category:Works by Julian Michael Carver]]

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Rain of Metal
Story information
Author Julian Michael Carver
Type Short Story
Product Shrapnel Issue 10
Content

Rain of Metal is a short story by Julian Michael Carver that was published in the tenth issue of Shrapnel.

Plot summary

On 7 July 3064, on planet Kikuyu, the mercenary group Storm's Metal Thunder were facing an overwhelming attack by Clan Jade Falcon forces. Sergeant Andrew Rivenberg attempts to assist his commander, Colonel Griff Storm, but arrives nearby just in time to see him die. Without alternatives, Andrew begins retreating towards the unit's drop zone. On the way there, he's hailed by his brother and superior, Lieutenant Timothy Rivenberg. Andrew informs him of his situation, and Falcon fighters are overrunning the drop zone. Timothy has the only remaining 'Mech, and orders his brother to return before it's too late. Andrew complies and accelerates his advance toward the Thunder's devastated base. He manages to see the drop zone from far, and sees the unit's noncombatants and dependents still on their way to the two remaining DropShips. Andrew finds himself under overwhelming attack by a Falcon Mad Cat. They exchange fire, but Andrew's Salamander falls to the ground. The Mad Cat approaches, apparently to kill him, when a Demolisher tank attacks it from the rear. He returns fire while the tank attempts to retreat, and this gives Andrew the opportunity to stand his 'Mech up. He manages to crush the Falcon's cockpit, killing the pilot, but the Demolisher has already been destroyed. Andrew resumes his path to the drop zone, finding his brother's 'Mech the last defender. With Falcon forces approaching from behind, Andrew obey Timothy's order to board, barely making it inside the DropShip before losing conciousness and falling. Andrew awakens in the DropShip's sick bay, being watched by his brother. Timothy informs him about what happened: a Falcon's Gauss slug struck his 'Mech's leg, making him fall. That causes Andrew to remember what happened to the colonel, and he attempts to explain his failure to his brother, but Timothy cuts him off, saying that Storm was responsible for the debacle with his innadequate tactics. Timothy informs Andrew about his plan to go to Melissia, expecting the forces gathering there to stop the Jade Falcons, before leaving his brother alone.

Featured characters

Featured BattleTech

Featured planets