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Annihilator

There has been a question about the -1G variant of the Annihilator. I don't have RS:Klondike, so would you mind checking on it? --Scaletail 05:31, 23 December 2011 (PST)

Doneve's answered the question.--Mbear^(talk) 03:57, 19 January 2012 (PST)

Record Sheets 3050 Upgrades Unabridged

Hy Mbear, i see you removed the moratorium template, i want to stard adding BV (2.0) to all variants, i don't want to delete BV's there don't match the RS:3050Uu Clans & Star League entry, but i delete the RS:3050U references, i cant found on the old Record Sheets any BV, i give you an example on the Dasher page, i stard to do this yet, please give me a response when you found time, thanks.--Doneve 12:38, 18 January 2012 (PST)

I don't see anything wrong with what you've done.--Mbear^(talk) 03:56, 19 January 2012 (PST)

Take a look

Hy again, please can you take a look on this interesting talk BattleTechWiki talk:Project Military Commands#force structure of the different factions, what you are think about this.--Doneve 13:28, 19 January 2012 (PST)

Rank Insignia

Hello Mbear, I upload the insignia because they are different from yours. It was mentioned in the Field Manual: Federated Suns p. 26 that the ranks insignia changed after the seperation from the Lyran Alliance. Furthermore a few ranks were reestablished or new created. My goal is to put at every military organization page a link to a site were the the rank structure is explained with the different between naval and army. Neuling 09:28, 1 February 2012 (PST)

I think I understand, but just to be sure I do I want to rephrase what you said this way:

My goal is to create a page similar to Armed Forces of the Federated Suns Military Ranks that will contain information regarding the roles and responsibilities of the army and naval ranks are clearly defined. For example the duties of an AFFS Leftenant Colonel/Light Commodore in 3025 are different from those of an AFFS Leftenant Colonel/Light Commodore in 3067. This page will show the difference in responsibilities.

At the same time, I also want to show how the FedCom Alliance affected the rank structures of the AFFS and the LCAF, as you don't provide any information about that.

Am I reading you correctly? If so, this is a good idea and one I wish I had thought of.--Mbear^(talk)

You understand my intention about the project correctly. It will take some time to compare the different system and to find a way how I can explain the differents understandable.Neuling 05:39, 2 February 2012 (PST)

DCMS Deploment

Hello Mbear, please take a look at User:Neuling/DCMS Deployment and give me your response. The article is abut the deployment of DCMS forces. The next step are the expansion of

3050 - 20 Year Update

3054 - Objective Raids

3059 - Field Manual Draconis Combine

3062 - Shattered Sphere

3067 - Field Manual Updates

3079 - Field Report DCMS

when possible with maps in a gallery for comparision. tnx Neuling 13:31, 6 February 2012 (PST)

I would to say a lot of the content on the page merged with the DCMS Military District pages during the various eras, example Dieron Military District.--Doneve 14:16, 6 February 2012 (PST)

I agree with Doneve that a lot of this would look good on the relevant Military District page. I also like your idea of including a map of the relevant prefecture/district. You might put that in another column in your table.--Mbear^(talk) 06:24, 7 February 2012 (PST)

I made some minor spelling and grammar changes to the page. Deletions are shown in strikethrough. Not bad really, just some basic errors that crept in and detract from the article.--Mbear^(talk) 06:30, 7 February 2012 (PST)

Spelling

Hello Mbear, I use a spell checker to improve the quality of my work. Please tell me if he works reliable. AFFS training & education Tnx Neuling 12:30, 8 February 2012 (PST)

The spell checker did a good job of finding all the misspelled words. It didn't find instances of the wrong word being used or some oddities with past vs. present tense, but that's understandable. For example under Military Academies Enrollment header:

The aspirant must pass a fare harder test then the usual enlisted.

Should be

The aspirant must pass a far harder test then the usual enlisted.

But overall using the spell checker has eliminated a lot of the small spelling errors that were previously in your work. Good job.--Mbear^(talk) 06:05, 9 February 2012 (PST)

2011 Superior Editor of the Year Award

Congratulations on your win, man. I'm not at all surprised to see you with this. Your editorial skills have been consistent, fair and broad. I'm glad this went to you.--Revanche ^{(talk|contribs)} 19:34, 12 February 2012 (PST)

Thanks!--Mbear^(talk) 03:47, 13 February 2012 (PST)

Modified Map

Hello Mbear, I created a map for the Kagoshima Prefecture with the DCMS deployment. Please awnser my a few question: 1st What can be improved? 2nd Where can it be incoporated? 3rd Was it a good idea? 4th Shoud I carry on with the work about such maps? tnx Neuling 09:22, 13 February 2012 (PST)

1a. Right now I don't see a thumbnail when I click the image. I'm not sure what's going on there but it's something I'd look into if I were you.

1b. I've corrected the image template. You don't put anything on the Image Summary line, but the lines underneath it. (This is really important.)

2. I've put a link to the image in place on your test DCMS deployment page. I've basically added it to the second table in a new column. If we expand the prefectures into actual pages, putting it on that page as well seems logical.

3. I think so. You may also want to make a plain map that just shows the Prefecture worlds for general use. For example on the Prefecture page you've currently got redlinked. If we ever establish maps for the Successor States, this would be a good image for that as well.

4. I can't think of a reason not to carry on.

I hope that helps!--Mbear^(talk) 09:58, 13 February 2012 (PST)

Image

Hy Mbear please can you move the new xtro image to his right place or rename the file, thanks.--Doneve 08:03, 14 February 2012 (PST)

Done! You had the right filename, but the extension of the image you provided is JPEG, not JPG. XTRO Primitives, Volume 2.jpeg--Mbear^(talk) 11:07, 14 February 2012 (PST)

Components

Hello Mbear, I have a large project underway. I will bring all availble components to sarna.net. Furthermore I will update the manufacturer pages after the complete upload of all information to my sub pages. Please take a look (User:Neuling/TRO 3085 - Components) and give me your response. Tnx Neuling

That's a lot of work. I can't think of anything else to say.--Mbear^(talk) 12:00, 14 February 2012 (PST)

And what do you thinking about it?Neuling 12:34, 14 February 2012 (PST)

I think it would be useful on the appropriate page (large laser, etc.).--Mbear^(talk) 04:52, 15 February 2012 (PST)