User talk:BobTheZombie/Sandbox

Nice! And thanks for doing this. I've mentioned on other pages that I'd like to see the units (Avalon Hussars, Davion Brigade of Guards, etc.) listed on the main page. They have onlyinclude tags on them so it would just pull in the first paragraph of the brigade page. That's the only comment I have on this.--Mbear^(talk) 03:31, 26 March 2014 (PDT)

And actually, the same thing should appear under the Military Departments section. Just a brief list of the departments at a minimum. (They are critical to the AFFS, after all. ;) )--Mbear^(talk) 03:33, 26 March 2014 (PDT)

I think the page could do with mentioning that the AFFS is the successor to the Federated Peacekeeping Force (FPF), the date it changed from the FPF to the AFFS, and a short summary of why/under whose orders. I do like the look and layout though - clean and minimalist without being too minimalist. BrokenMnemonic (talk) 04:14, 26 March 2014 (PDT)

Adding those main military departments and units could work; I'll try changing it later. As for the FPF, I'd never heard of that and will have to look into that, or you could add something if you want. -BobTheZombie (talk) 07:50, 26 March 2014 (PDT)

I don't think the FPF is mentioned in more than two or three books - I'll have a hunt around, and see what I can turn up. BrokenMnemonic (talk) 10:21, 26 March 2014 (PDT)

I've dug out what I can easily while at work about the FPF - I still need to go through House Davion (The Federated Suns) for references and additional detail on the latter half of the article, but the bulk of the important detail should be there. Is ther eenough for you to add some detail to the AFFS page on the formation of the AFFS from the FPF and the events around it? The Davion Civil War is one of those articles that I look at, think that I really do need to write a new version of, and then put it off because of how much work would be involved. BrokenMnemonic (talk) 03:17, 28 March 2014 (PDT)