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I noticed your comment that you think the article needs a lot of work. I spent a lot of time on that page and am wondering what you think is wrong with it? [[User:Dark Jaguar|Dark Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Dark Jaguar|talk]]) 10:26, 29 May 2016 (PDT) | I noticed your comment that you think the article needs a lot of work. I spent a lot of time on that page and am wondering what you think is wrong with it? [[User:Dark Jaguar|Dark Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Dark Jaguar|talk]]) 10:26, 29 May 2016 (PDT) | ||
:I didn't say there was a lot wrong with it, I just thought I saw something grammatical near the end that could be fixed so I wanted to check back on it later. Perhaps it was nothing. I put that tag (and the comment that I "will come back and work on") when I see something to possibly proofread later. Sorry for the confusion. -[[User:BobTheZombie|BobTheZombie]] ([[User talk:BobTheZombie|talk]]) 10:54, 29 May 2016 (PDT) | :I didn't say there was a lot wrong with it, I just thought I saw something grammatical near the end that could be fixed so I wanted to check back on it later. Perhaps it was nothing. I put that tag (and the comment that I "will come back and work on") when I see something to possibly proofread later. Sorry for the confusion. -[[User:BobTheZombie|BobTheZombie]] ([[User talk:BobTheZombie|talk]]) 10:54, 29 May 2016 (PDT) | ||
+ | :: Ok, its just normally I've seen that tag used when the page is so bad it requires a complete rewrite! [[User:Dark Jaguar|Dark Jaguar]] ([[User talk:Dark Jaguar|talk]]) 11:18, 29 May 2016 (PDT) |
Revision as of 14:18, 29 May 2016
Proofreading
Feel free to add any pages you want proofread or cleaned up to the bottom of this list and I will go through and clean them up.
- 1st Shin Legion
- Tikonov Guards
- 2nd Tikonov Guards
- 1st Tikonov Guards
- 3rd Tikonov Guards
- Spidermech
- Lucien Davion
- Huntress (BattleMech)
- History
Welcome
For your consideration - Epsilon Regiment (Wolf's Dragoons)
BTZ - Epsilon Regiment (Wolf's Dragoons) has been re-written. I want you to know i accepted your critique of my Beta Regiment article (posted back in 2013), to heart. As such, this article is about 40 percent shorter, where i trimmed and summarized a lot of redundant material. I feel the end product is superior, and hope others will find it so. At some point, i will go back and perform the needed revisions to Beta Regiment and the other Dragoon articles. But please give Epsilon a look and let me know. Thank you. ClanWolverine101 (talk) 12:59, 16 April 2016 (PDT)
Clan Smoke Jaguar Minor Characters
I noticed your comment that you think the article needs a lot of work. I spent a lot of time on that page and am wondering what you think is wrong with it? Dark Jaguar (talk) 10:26, 29 May 2016 (PDT)
- I didn't say there was a lot wrong with it, I just thought I saw something grammatical near the end that could be fixed so I wanted to check back on it later. Perhaps it was nothing. I put that tag (and the comment that I "will come back and work on") when I see something to possibly proofread later. Sorry for the confusion. -BobTheZombie (talk) 10:54, 29 May 2016 (PDT)
- Ok, its just normally I've seen that tag used when the page is so bad it requires a complete rewrite! Dark Jaguar (talk) 11:18, 29 May 2016 (PDT)