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| − | + | * I decided to add the two commanding officers, since their commands' involvement should be reflected in their articles too. | |
| + | * Added & cited Moors' death, even though it is not explictly stated in this section. | ||
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| − | Comments: | + | Comments: |
| + | * I added minor characters category link to Kedika Moore and Michael Hawkins. | ||
| + | * Added regimental status to 1st Genyosha on Luthien article. | ||
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| + | [[Category:UBP Mission JTP Luthien]] | ||
Latest revision as of 22:10, 21 October 2023
Contents
Fact Checker: Articles Links[edit]
| Second Battle of the Takashi Memorial Spaceport | 3074 | Clan Ghost Bear | Rho Galaxy (Clan Ghost Bear) | 32nd Division (Word of Blake) |
| Battle of Luthien (3067) | Luthien | 3075 | Takashi Memorial Spaceport |
Comments:
- Battle of Luthien and Luthien added, since these are notable events for both of those larger-scale articles.
- 3075: it says "late 3075" which means anytime after June, in my opinion, but I'm sure it intends anything September or later.
Research Writer: Articles Completed[edit]
| Second Battle of the Takashi Memorial Spaceport | 3074 | Clan Ghost Bear | Rho Galaxy (Clan Ghost Bear) | 32nd Division (Word of Blake) |
| Battle of Luthien | Luthien | 3075 | Takashi Memorial Spaceport | Michael Hawkins |
| Kedika Moors |
Comments:
- I decided to add the two commanding officers, since their commands' involvement should be reflected in their articles too.
- Added & cited Moors' death, even though it is not explictly stated in this section.
Fact Checker: Articles Reviewed[edit]
| Second Battle of the Takashi Memorial Spaceport | 3074 | Clan Ghost Bear | Rho Galaxy (Clan Ghost Bear) | 32nd Division (Word of Blake) |
| Battle of Luthien | Luthien | 3075 | Takashi Memorial Spaceport | Michael Hawkins |
| Kedika Moors |
Comments: I decided to add a Notes section to Kedika Moors, to explain the presumed death date.
Copy Editor: Articles Edited[edit]
| Second Battle of the Takashi Memorial Spaceport | 3074 | Clan Ghost Bear | Rho Galaxy (Clan Ghost Bear) | 32nd Division (Word of Blake) |
| Battle of Luthien | Luthien | 3075 | Takashi Memorial Spaceport | Michael Hawkins |
| Kedika Moors |
Comments:
- I added minor characters category link to Kedika Moore and Michael Hawkins.
- Added regimental status to 1st Genyosha on Luthien article.